Shakespearean Cupids (8/13)

[tkel_paris]

Title: Shakespearean Cupids

Rating: T for emotional angst, innuendo, and Jack-style machinations

Summary: When two people are reminiscent of a Shakespearean couple, friends and family are liable to borrow from the Bard himself to bring them together.

Disclaimer: I don't have the money to go see the awesomeness of David Tennant and Catherine Tate in a

Comments

[thenoblethang]

OMIGEE time is being rewritten.

I'm enjoying Jenny's fill-in as the Doctor too. That little soldier. Or big, as she still makes me want to cower in the corner a bit, hee.

*waits with baited breath for next chapter*

[tkel_paris]

Love the icon, BTW!

Yeah, Jenny is one tough Time Girl. River should be more scared than she is, but I suppose that someone who's seen the Universe end would have a warped view of danger. The only thing River's done that I liked was making that one Dalek beg for mercy.

The more people who review, the more likely I am to post the nest chapter within a day... We shall see... as I'm still struggling with some of the rest of the story...

[sczep84]

*squeals* River is beginning to forget her time with the Doctor? That's AWESOME. Yay, let's let time rewrite itself and the Doctor stays with Donna forever *grins* Right?

Love that Jenny's so much like her dad!

[tkel_paris]

Now, now, now... Be patient... All will be explained in due course... Though I share quite a bit in your glee... (smirks)

Like him and yet not like him, as she'd point out. Recall her thoughts as she talks to Skeleton Proper Dave...

[katherine_b]

I really love the way you've arranged this, so that we get the chance to see Jenny taking her father's place and very thoroughly filling his shoes. You've made River fascinating as well, with her memory of events, as well as the diary itself, fading away. Can't wait to see where you take us next!

[tkel_paris]

And at times, filling them better than he could! Note all the times she has scathing comments about her Dad's techniques and habits... The ways in which she's more cautious than he was in the actual episode...

What?! No comment on the one NEW piece of knowledge River gained without a clue as to where it came from...?!

[katherine_b]

Yes, she certainly has her mother's common sense (which, let's face it, one would need if you also inherited the Doctor's 'jump first, ask questions later' approach).

*lol* I love that piece of knowledge and I can't wait to see where you take us with it!

[storywriter84]

Excellent! I enjoy this chapter. I quite like the idea of Jenny taking the Doctor's place. Are we going to see the Doctor and Donna in the other place and what they went through?

[tkel_paris]

Ah...! Jenny might say she's doing a better job. After all, she's got some of Donna mixed into her mind, and she's also her own person.

Oh, we will see them! Part of why I didn't mix thing up is because I'm still not happy with how those chapters are turning out. They need some expansion and revision still.

[bas_math_girl]

Great to see this chapter turn out so well; and it was no trouble, I assure you, to help once I got my head back. :)
*hugs*

[tkel_paris]

(hugs) As soon as the danged 11th chapter crosses to completed first draft, I'll send it, and then the rest!

Hope your head's doing well...