FIC: Ginger Goddess, Part 3 (1/?)

[tkel_paris]

Title: Ginger Goddess, Part 3: Drama in Venice and Spacial Multiplicity
Series: none - first part belonged to “There's The Door!”
Rating: M (there be smut inside in more than one spot, or at least some adult thoughts or implications)
Author: tkel_paris
Summary: Unaware of the Doctor's intentions even after months of traveling with him, Donna confronts her

Comments

Ginger Goddess

[ext_2713573]

Two updates in one day? Yes! Thank you! I love this story so I was really excited to see that you had updated it. It was a sad chapter in that it dealt with Eileen's death, but I thought you handled it well. I liked the Doctors' thoughts on Nerys. Basically, he has no interest in her at all, but at least she dresses well for her age.

I'm so glad Donna knows about regeneration now. Hopefully something will happen in this story and the Doctor and Donna will have more then just her Human lifespan to spend together.

Donna being Sylvia's only serving child, and only girl, makes sense in the way that Sylvia treats Donna. Especially if Sylvia never wanted a daughter.

Re: Ginger Goddess

[tkel_paris]

Well, I had to post something on my online mummy's birthday. Even if the story is incomplete as a whole. She's the one who "tricked" me into writing Doctor Who, after all. :)

Yeah. I felt bad about having Eileen die in the first chapter, but it's turned out to be an important catalyst for future events. Along with Donna's childhood. Stay tuned... and thank you for commenting on both posts!

[dm12]

It seems the Doctor is telling Donna things he never imagined he'd reveal. It's good she knows about them, and her reaction was pure Donna-- full of compassion and worry for him. Then again, the Doctor was there for her with her Gran's death.

I'm glad you're continuing this series. I've been wanting to know how they reach the point they did at the beginning of the story, so in love and full of life.

[tkel_paris]

And they'd just taken care of seeing her Gramps home safely. So her reaction seemed natural.

Oh, yes. Getting back full circle. That's my goal, too. :)

[alimoseby]

This is very very good, I have to say. It did deal with a sad event and all, but still so much was told here. I love it.

~Ali ♥

[tkel_paris]

*hugs* Yeah. Sets up a lot, though. Once I have the time to sit down and finish writing and polishing.

As always, thanks for commenting. :)

[anyagotr]

The very best, that is why he tells her things he never told anyone else.
Looking forward to do much more!

[tkel_paris]

Thank you. :D

[anyagotr]

Of course, and always. :)

[starseeker32]

Yay! I've been wondering what happens next!

Ooh, interesting take on The Moment and Bad Wolf. I thought Donna would have been a better conscience for the Doctor than Rose. Or, y'know, have Jimminy Cricket come out of the box. Kidding. Though that could be a crack!fic or crack!vid idea for a later date. :-)

It'd be easier if he could just show her telepathically, but he knew enough to know she wasn't ready for that at all. So the long path it had to be. He wondered how long the long path would take.

I'm glad these two are taking a long respectful path, though I am always interested in the extent of the telepathy between these two (two halves of a whole). Can't wait to read the rest of the journey!

[tkel_paris]

Jimminy Cricket. Oh, he would've been a helper. Which might help influence a different, non-crack idea on the backburner. :)

The journey is coming. Please bear with me. RL is picking up fast, or so it feels like. And today I was unexpectedly wiped out. I guess previous lack of sleep finally caught up with me.