FIC: Amalgamation (2/3?)

Sep 03, 2014 19:01


Title: Amalgamation

Series: (none)

Rating: T for the first two parts (naughty comments among... other stuff) and M for the final

Author: tkel_paris

Summary: The Meta-Crisis transforms Donna Noble in a way that only Caan could foresee. No one is prepared for what comes next.

Disclaimer: That this didn't happen proves I own nothing.

Dedication: tardis_mole. I was ( Read more... )

rating = t, ten, rose tyler, mickey smith, doctor/donna, gemmiel, donna, doctor who, martha jones, fanfic, handy, jack harkness, jackie tyler, birthdays

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Comments 14

dtstrainers September 4 2014, 01:06:07 UTC
This has been so fun to read! I can see Donna taking down Rose with ease, and I know people who would pay good money to see that!

Thanks much for this.

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tkel_paris September 4 2014, 05:18:05 UTC
Right now I can name some people who would really pay money to see Rose taken down. Oh, well. JB's social media followers should help on that score. Now if we could only take down someone else to make way for the Most Important Woman in all of Creation...

Welcome. :D

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alimoseby September 4 2014, 04:57:28 UTC
Oh yeah. This was pretty much awesome. I"m kind of giggling at everyone's reactions though. It would be odd.

Hah. Rose was taken down. *fistpump* Bye Rose. Don't stay in touch.

Are you going to have Sylvia's reaction? =D That will be highly amusing.

Loved it.

~Ali ♥︎

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tkel_paris September 4 2014, 05:18:30 UTC
*giggles*

Okay. I will. Wilf's, too. :D

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ext_2713573 September 4 2014, 07:08:18 UTC
Next time, instead of giving the Doctor a choice in the matter can Rose just be taken straight to the Shadow Proclamation? I mean really, with all those deaths she's responsible for and the only thing the Doctor is going to do to her is leave her in a Parallel World where her Step Dad and her Mum are filthy rich? How ever will she cope? Oh the horrors.

I loved it when you let Jack shoot his gun, with his thoughts of how the Doctor never let's him shoot his gun.

I loved everyone's reactions to what has happened to Donna. Especially the Doctor's. She's not going to make life easy on hiim, that's for sure.

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tkel_paris September 4 2014, 13:25:05 UTC
This is someone Donna recognized doesn't want to kill if he has the choice. He may also feel that he still owes Jackie for taking her child away in the first place. And I believe I didn't exactly say what he chose, did I?

My beta liked it, too. I know Jack did. ;)

Oh, just wait... Just wait... ;D

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anyagotr September 5 2014, 00:56:24 UTC
Oh, take her down, Donna!

Everyone's reaction was priceless, although, I thought Jake would have had a bigger reaction. Love how everyone listened to Donna though. :-)

Oh... I love the teasing! Can't wait to see more of that!

This is so wonderful!

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tkel_paris September 5 2014, 02:00:29 UTC
Heh! That's what I'm thinking regarding the Radio Times thing right now, only a different R. :)

Well, Jack's not so tied to events and timelines. He might've figured things out before the Doctor did.

More coming up. When I can spare the time and make the energy to do it. This has been a long week and it's not over.

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inward_audacity September 5 2014, 13:19:30 UTC
Can we just take Rose to the Shadow Proclamation already? I mean, how is she still allowed to have second chances? Maybe in her head being in the parallel universe and away from the Doctor is the worst thing that can happen but after everything she did, being there is as good as winning the lottery. The Doctor is too kind to her. I know he doesn't want to hurt anyone but Rose is a hazard to herself and all the universes (as proven over and over again).

Yes! I love sassy Donna (and TenII). More sassy Donna please! It's wonderful to see the Doctor speechless and lost. Only Donna has the ability to do that :D

Two sets of everything. Hmm. I don't know what to think. I can't wait for the next chapter!

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tkel_paris September 5 2014, 17:32:45 UTC
I think I said it before: it only makes sense if he feels he owes Jackie. But he'd better inform her that the condition is she and Pete see to the Cannon's destruction and keep Rose away from Torchwood. If she doesn't feel they can succeed... and she'd better be honest with him about it...

Anyway, there will be lots of sass still to come. And torment for the Doctor. ;D

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