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tkel_paris

FIC: Regression (1/1)

May 30, 2013 21:53

Title: Regression
Rating: T
Author: tkel_paris
Summary: A member of the Shadow Proclamation tags along for the search for Earth, speaking on ensuring that the ultimate culprit is punished. It leads the TARDIS to take inspiration from her past to protect Handy and Donna.
Disclaimer: This would've been a possibility had I anything to do with Who.
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rating = t, martha jones, series = there's the door!, may story a day 2012, birthdays, ten, doctor/donna, mickey smith, rose tyler, doctor who, donna, sarah jane smith, fanfic, handy, jack harkness, jackie tyler

Comments 13

alimoseby May 31 2013, 07:13:43 UTC

This was epic. I love seeing Rose get the what for and the how to. Especially when all the companions are there to hear it. =D I always feel bad for Jackie though. =/

"Street rat" and "worthless ginger". Oh, that makes me want to introduce Rose to my knuckles.

Wonder what the punishment will be...

Loved it.

~Ali ♥

tkel_paris May 31 2013, 13:33:23 UTC

That might've been part of why I couldn't select a punishment this time, what made my mind draw blanks. But it didn't stop me from forcing Rose to get what for. :P

Martha would've done it for you if Jackie hadn't intervened. :)

Thank you! Glad I not only had something to post for you, but I slightly cleared my WIPs list. :)

serenityslady May 31 2013, 16:22:50 UTC

Time Family. Rose gets what-for. Shadow Proclamation demanding punishment. Wow! This had it all!

Rose really went right off the rails there, spewing at the Duplicate. The Bad Wolf warped her mind. She actually became mentally unstable, I believe.

Regression or fits? Hmmm. Ponderous choice.

Very well done, my dear.

tkel_paris May 31 2013, 18:40:51 UTC

You're welcome. :D

I think she was already warped. Bad Wolf made it worse, I will agree.

I decided to leave it up to the readers to imagine her fate. :)

Thank you! :D

serenityslady June 3 2013, 15:26:02 UTC

It kills me whenever I read people saying what a wonderful companion Rose was to the Doctor. When did she do anything constructive or selfless? Yes, she was already twisted before Bad Wolf. Being a teenager didn't help either!

Personally, I'd like Jackie to have the opportunity to help Rose rehabilitate. There are seizure drugs that could help with the fits. I agree with the Shadow Proclamation: Rose should have to know she is being punished.

:D

bas_math_girl May 31 2013, 22:22:09 UTC

*places my punishment vote in the box* Phew! I am so relieved that the Duplicate was recognised as the Doctor and Donna's son, and that he wasn't allowed to be left on Pete's World.

tkel_paris June 1 2013, 03:26:27 UTC

Knew you'd like it. :DDDDDD

dm12 June 6 2013, 20:32:52 UTC

I agree!

Not sure what punishment to vote for, but it is definitely warranted. With Rose, it was all about what the Universe could do for her. Donna, on the other hand, wanted to know what she could do to help the Doctor, share in his burden, and help the Universe become a better place for all. What a difference! But then, Donna is much more mature, not one of those kids the Doctor used to travel around with...

bas_math_girl June 6 2013, 22:23:54 UTC

True! There are those who ask what the universe can for them, and those of us who ask what we can do for the universe; maturity isn't the only deciding personality factor. Not that I'm suggesting...okay, maybe I am! ;D

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ext_2713573 April 1 2015, 15:18:51 UTC

I love it when Rose gets punished by the Shadow Proclamation. I'm usually not a big fan of OC characters, but I love Decima. I'd really like to see her character again in another story. Since I have epilepsy myself I think the best punishment for Rose is a combination of what the Doctor and Decima both want. Regress her to between 3-5 years old, but let her know that she used to be older, letting her remember her time with the Doctor, but at the same time not allowing her to remember what he looked like, or what he was called. That way she could know that she was younger, not as a gift, but as a punishment. I'd block her memories of the TARDIS as well. Since Donna was in danger of her mind burning if she ever remembered the Doctor I think it only fair that Rose have a seizure if she ever tries to remember, or speak of her time with the Doctor, or if she tries to use alien technology.

tkel_paris April 3 2015, 04:38:37 UTC

Decima coming back? Well, she's supposed to be that same andron who helped Donna in canon, so I suppose that's possible. Ooh! That's a thought: not total regression but partial. I like it! I may show that to another writer and see whether they want to tackle it as well. :D