NEW: Truth Shines Through (1/1) - "Riverlets Through Time" series (3/12)

[tkel_paris]

Title: Truth Shines Through
Series: Riverlets Through Time
Rating: T (angst, some... adult implications)
Author: tkel_paris
Summary: Donna is extremely introspective after the Doctor returns to her in “Midnight.” Enough that she has to make some decisions... Third story in the “Riverlets Through Time” series.
Dedication: nini_cuddles, as her fic “The Bride” made

Comments

[nini_cuddles]

first: I love how you are writing this. like someone is telling the story by mind. you don't do actual dialogues, it's more what they meant to say. like someone is telling. I can almost hear a voice when I'm reading, telling the story to me. beautiful.
second: NOT SHAN SHEN. DON'T GO THERE. JUST. JUST DON'T.

[tkel_paris]

Aw, thanks! :D
After "Bridal Fears" finished without actual dialogue, the rest of the series HAVE to be the same way. Which is a strange challenge when writing instructors ALWAYS say, "Show, not tell."
Ah... Well... you'll see... Hopefully within two days, if I can write another part quickly.

[alimoseby]

I love this. I really do, all of the parts. The writing is beautiful, and I can picture these things happening. Can't wait for more. =)

~Ali♥

[tkel_paris]

Thanks! :D

[nipponophile05]

Oh, I loved this, particularly: "He was looking at her like she was the most precious thing in his world. Water and food combined to his parched, starving being."

She really is all this, and more, to him. So beautiful that he reveals himself fully to her, so that they can be bonded forever. Take that, Professor Smug! And Bottle Blonde!

[tkel_paris]

Whew! I was worried that was a bit... of a trope. :)

*snickers* I think he couldn't help himself at that point. She offered him everything, and his wounded soul needed the comfort that she could provide as his wife. Of course, it goes far beyond that, but you know what I mean. :)

[fansquee]

I love Donna, now I love her even more!

Yay for ready-made famlies!!!

[tkel_paris]

I seem to love her more with each fic I write. :)

Yes! Oh, to have had Jenny around for the rest of the series!!!