Altered History: Time Trials (9/11)

Jan 02, 2019 13:35

Title: Time Trials
Series: Altered History
Genre: Doctor Who
Rating: T/M (dark Doctor, character death, extreme danger)
Summary: Eight does not want to answer a mysterious - and diverted - call to come to The Library, but Donna won't let him shirk his duty. Yet the dangers there echo ones from the past, and the Doctor has never been so close to ( Read more... )

rating = t, ten, rose tyler, mickey smith, doctor who, cassikat, eight, ficverse = altered history, bas_math_girl, fanfic, jackie tyler, tardis-mole, fic!presents

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bas_math_girl February 23 2019, 04:08:06 UTC
You got them to let the innocent Sycrorax go home. Thank you!

Eight's pleasure that Rose didn't hug him was fun to see.
In fact, he was relieved; he would have had to put his shields up. And his arms. Hahahaha! Good, she got the message.

I enjoyed the two Doctors talking together in private, and the intriguing mention of the two visitors; but this about Rose Not when you've given her a set-down that she needed sounds wrong. Did you mean to say that she got a "put-down"? (Unless she was driven somewhere, I suppose)

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tkel_paris February 23 2019, 06:01:03 UTC
I'm sure that'll have a domino effect somewhere. I'll have to think about it. Welcome!

Well, is it that or rather that she's miffed he's so utterly unimpressed with her and has thwarted her wishes? :)

Oh. Oops. :*) Well, I suppose that depends on several things. Anyway, looking forward to your thoughts on the final two chapters!

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docdonna August 26 2021, 04:28:06 UTC
Part01 of review:

He led the Humans in turning to look at the TARDIS. The doors opened, and the Eleventh Doctor stood in his borrowed clothes, grinning.

“Did you miss me?” he said, carefree.

SO have the Doctor and Donna binged on Sherlock then and he’s being tongue in cheek by using Moriarty’s phrasing before Sherlock even came out? That and I think that he’s still a wee bit out of it…

Tea! That's all I needed, a good cup of tea! Super-heated infusion of free radicals and tannin. Just the thing for healing the synapses.”

Eight face-palmed himself. “Of course! Why didn't I think of that?!”

“It had to happen this way, I'm afraid,” Eleven explained, as if telling him to not be so hard on himself. *snickers* at least Eight’s head is still attached (though trying to get straight/any answers from Rose would distract anyone)…though if it didn’t have to happen this way I’d assume that the Time Ladies would have included both Eleven and Eight’s favorite tea blends in the medical bag…plus Eleven being out of it so long definitely gave ( ... )

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docdonna August 26 2021, 04:28:54 UTC
Part02 of review:

“Look at these people. These human beings. Consider their potential. From the day they arrive on the planet and blinking step into the sun, there is more to see than can ever be seen. More to do than. No, hold on. Sorry, that's The Lion King.”

Eight covered his eyes. Was this what he would become? From one ill-mannered person to another?

Eleven's gaze turned harsh, clearly aware of Eight's thoughts about how it seemed like being hit on by a ten-year-old. He channeled it against the leader. “Want to know the best bit? This new hand? It's a fighting hand!”

Eight's lips pursed at the brief switch in accent from English to American, but remained silent as the fighting resumed. It lasted several seconds before Eleven gained an advantage. He pressed it immediately, disarming the Sycorax leader and thumping both hilts into his abdomen, twice. The leader fell, right on the edge, overlooking London.*snickers* I just imagine all of the Doctor’s and Donna’s Time Tots that have forced the Doctor to watch Disney movies and ( ... )

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docdonna August 26 2021, 04:29:15 UTC
Part03 of review:

“Ah, yes. Who were those Time Ladies who projected themselves into my TARDIS? They seemed rather young to manage that trick ( ... )

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