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tkel_paris

NEW: Donna's Terse, Unimpressed Replies

Aug 31, 2011 17:08

Title: Donna's Terse, Unimpressed Replies

Rating: T

Author: tkel_paris, aka KendraC

Summary: Spaceman wrote Donna three times. What were her answers? Companion piece to bas_math_girl's Love Letters... Almost... Hopefully and the second story in what's become a series.

Disclaimer: Would BMG and I have written these if we owned DW and its characters? Well... Maybe; they would' ( Read more... )

rating = t, ten, doctor/donna, nipponophile05, donna, doctor who, short fic, bas_math_girl, fanfic, prompts

Comments 20

bas_math_girl August 31 2011, 23:33:27 UTC

I love the idea of the TARDIS turning off the translation circuits!! And poor Donna still suffering from self-esteem problems. :'(

Great stuff, love!!

tkel_paris September 1 2011, 00:15:21 UTC

And once Donna realized she was affected by his words, those insecurities would rear their ugly heads. She just can't believe that she could really be loved... :'(

Thank you for letting me at it! :D

juliaaurelia September 1 2011, 01:33:57 UTC

I liked these, and thought they were well-written. Bringing up Martha was particularly good, as an example of somebody who Donna *knew* had had her heart broken by the Doctor. And I liked the struck-out parts and could imagine the Doctor still being able to read them.

tkel_paris September 1 2011, 01:51:24 UTC

Yep! She's very delicate... and so he's got his work cut out for him. I've leaving it open to BMG for first crack at the Doctor's response.

Thank you for reviewing! This was a fun first for me!

juliaaurelia September 1 2011, 10:51:22 UTC

You are very welcome and did very good for it being a first!

nipponophile05 September 2 2011, 07:33:47 UTC

Firstly, brilliant responses! So funny, and I think you've got Donna's voice just right.

Secondly, I know I asked this before and I was a bit slow off the mark then (has been kind of a busy week.... ), but could I have a go at the next stage of their correspondence?

nipponophile05 September 2 2011, 16:05:44 UTC

Okay, the next part is up at my LJ page, and it's titled An ongoing correspondence http://nipponophile05.livejournal.com/9421.html.

They way I've ended it, it begs for a continuation, which I'm more than happy to do myself, or flick back to other two authors, bas_math_girl and tkel_paris.

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thenoblethang September 2 2011, 16:02:50 UTC

HOW DID I MISS THIS BEFORE?!

I completely loved BMG's love letters, and this as a follow up is just amazing: you've got her voice spot on, with all her so not impressedness, and her insecurities. That bit of course made me sad and want to hug Donna all like "NO HE LOBES YOU".

Great work, yo!!

tkel_paris September 3 2011, 20:34:17 UTC

And have you read nipponophile05's response to these fics?! I think BMG and I have created a monster that won't die anytime soon! :D

Yep, we all want to hug her and be like, "No, he does love you. He's just absolute rubbish at showing it!" And then go slap some sense into him! ;D