Altered History: Echoes on Ood Sphere (7/7)

[tkel_paris]

Title: Altered History: Echos on Oodsphere
Genre: Doctor Who
Rating: T (violence, angst-ridden Doctor)
Author: tkel_paris
Summary: On another major journey the Doctor and Donna land on a planet of beings aware of him, but he doesn't know them. The danger compells him to reveal more about the past he is still fighting against, how he fears the Moment is still

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[bas_math_girl]

Oooh, lots of portents that things are going to get evil; especially at the end there. But the Ood warning was downright creepy. No wonder Donna questioned the Doctor about it.

Do you think the Ood Operations staff knew Halpern had changed into an Ood, or do you reckon they assumed he'd been killed? [yes, sometimes I wonder about these things]

Not common that I do so much good in spite of the deaths.
It must have cheered the Doctor up a great deal to be able to compliment himself in this way.

[tkel_paris]

Portents do seem to be part of this series, don't they? And the echoes of what was supposed to be.

I suspect they assumed he was dead. I think that was for the best, given all the problems they already faced. But I never gave that any thought.

It did. And was important to boosting his mood. Although I enjoyed Donna getting to teach him a little about Star Trek. :)

[docdonna]

I’m now wondering if anyone noticed the poshly dressed Ood that was previously Halpern…

I just LOVED that Eight had Donna help break the circle…he’s definitely treating her like a partner even if he hasn’t realized he’s romantically interested in her yet…

Regarding:
The Ood leader stared at him, unblinking as he tilted his head. “I think your song must change again soon.”

The Time Lord frowned. “And that means...?”

“Every song must end, and your story is yet to express the song the visions of the Ood have shown. Your song has changed from what an evil song wishes it to be, and that song will act again. It has already acted today, placing your song in greater danger than it originally planned,” Sigma added, turning slightly to face Donna.

I’m wondering if they mean that Eight’s song will change because of getting in a romantic pair bond with Donna/having a family with Donna or if they’re referring to the future DoctorDonna metacrisis…

your story is yet to express the song the visions of the Ood have shown.I’m wondering if the

[tkel_paris]

Oh, so many things I can't comment on without spoiling stories yet to be finished! But it does give me food for thought. ;)

I'm not done using the Star Trek references. As I hope you noticed in the following story. :)

Donna came much closer to being zapped by the rapid Ood here than in canon. It's a sign that the Moment will attempt to raise the danger level to try to restore the time-line she wanted.