Altered History: Prophecies and Pompeii (3/11?)

[tkel_paris]

Title: Altered History: Prophecies and Pompeii
Genre: Doctor Who
Rating: T/M (violence, whump)
Author: tkel_paris
Summary: Sequel to “Altered History: The Runaway Bride”. The Doctor's getting the location wrong (again) lands him and Donna in Pompeii on Volcano Day. She's determined to save as many as possible, but for him the events bring back the nightmare

Comments

[dm12]

Hmm... now that's interesting. He found his family loom in his travels, and Ohila is somehow related to the Doctor's family.

Good warning, not to become beguiled by the World-Ender. Gee, I wonder what she looks like.

[tkel_paris]

Yeah, something he was not expecting to find. And the wrong hands right now may include people in his own House.

Wait and see... ;)

And thank you for commenting! :D

[bas_math_girl]

Sorry I've only just been able to come back and comment.

The whole business about Ohila is very intriguing. As is him walking around with the family loom in his hands.

Thank you so much for posting this for my birthday! *hugs* :D

[tkel_paris]

You've had a lot on your plate. *hugs*

Yes. It's meant to be. :)

Thank you for commenting! I'll post more when I complete one of the later chapters. While I have two more completed, the one after them is nowhere near done. So I want that one off to beta before I post again. Which means I'd better do a little bit of writing tonight. :)

[cassikat]

What, by Rassilon's left nut, was the core of the Doctor's family Loom doing off Gallifrey? And whyever bring it to Ohila? There's intriguing hints there, m'dear, and curiosity has me bouncing in my seat!

That was an excellent warning, regarding not being beguiled by the World-Ender...are we tying into the ominous from last chapter regarding a certain she who wants Donna to have something on her back? Can't wait to find out!

*attempts cat-at-mousehole patience* *fails due to fidgets*

[tkel_paris]

Ah, patience... All will be revealed, but the fact that he felt it necessary to keep it OFF Gallifrey will be a clue to how serious the situation is. He's brought it to the one person in the universe he feels is able to shield it from notice and who wouldn't use it against him.

You know I can't answer that. ;)

*sighs* Off to write some more! :) And yes, I owe you a slew of betas!

[timeapprentice]

Wow! This is such a fascinating story! You are so wonderful for writing and posting it!

Ohilia related to the Doctor? The Loom of the Doctor's family?
The poor Doctor with his pain from losing his loved companions. I am so interested in Ohilia's warnings and the Doctor's reactions.

You make me wonder so much, thank you for writing this! It's fun and interesting. I'm only sorry that I'm just now catching up on it!

[tkel_paris]

Thank you! Have you read the first story in the series? That one makes this story a bit easier to understand. A bit. :)

Yes, and yes.

I know. I hated making him go through all that pain. And to have his life upended right after all those losses.

Keep watching for more. I'm working on Chapter 6 right now, and it needs work before I'm willing to post Chapter 4.