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FIC: Flipped, Book 3 (14/14)

May 18, 2016 21:45

Title: Flipped, Book 3
Rating: heavy T, with some M/MA (this one is rated M)
Author: tkel_paris
Summary: David Noble thought he had come to terms with the strange feelings the female Doctor inspired, and it seemed to be helped by Martha Jones joining them. But when the Aubertide threaten the Doctor, protecting her requires a cover that will test his sanity ( Read more... )

ficverse = flipped, wilf, martha jones, bas_math_girl, unit, idris/tardis, rating = m, doctor/donna, mickey smith, rose tyler, geoffrey, doctor who, sarah jane smith, david noble, sylvia, cassikat, fanfic, ginger!ten, jack harkness, jackie tyler, tardis-mole, fic!presents

Comments 7

tardis_mole May 23 2016, 08:03:03 UTC

The TARDIS converted The Moment in Huon particles. So she has a Moment to eat. (couldn't resist :D) Clever. I love it.

O.O Oh my word!!!! O.O They were flipped. O.O Literally flipped. O.O

Hahahaha! He's already making funnies about her having a huge belly. Po-faced indeed. Hahahaha.

Having been married to a red-haired woman I can categorically state that when they turn red, it goes all they down to... Well, that would be telling.

Sniffles for Geoffrey.

Eeee, thank you, thank you, thank you. Absolutely loved it. =DDDDD

tkel_paris May 23 2016, 08:19:24 UTC

Ooh, that is funny! I'm cleverer than I thought. :DDDD

I'm not sure I ever originally had an explanation in mind. I think I was originally going to leave it as fate, but once the Moment butted her way into the story that idea popped out.

Having read more than a few stories where the Doctor was reacting poorly to the thought of his pregnant belly getting in his way of flying the Old Girl, I think that instance spilled out in the revisions. O:)

Still get the picture...

I know. :'(

Welcome. Remind me to not come up with something so complicated the next time I write for you. :P I'm joking, but it was rough not having you as a beta for a work that took me well out of my comfort zone at first.

tardis_mole May 23 2016, 08:41:08 UTC

You're brilliant. :D

Fortuitous and providential. :DD

Absolutely priceless. I have an inner need now to write a scene to that effect. :DDD

Well, it was my prompting, so it was my fault. Next time I'll ask for something simple. I'll rephrase that. Next time, I'll 'try' to ask for something simple. It definitely stretched your comfort zone. And you did an amazing job with it. Spectacular. :DDDD

tkel_paris May 23 2016, 21:09:06 UTC

:*D

And I think a little missing scene/coda is calling out to be written. In which the Doctor might figure out who was responsible for the flip. Or have some educated guesses.

Find one of your stories where it fits in. *evil grin*

*snorts* Just ask. I'll see what I can do with it. You're welcome. Now... will I get a multi-chapter story as a fic-present someday? :DDDDDDDDDDDDD

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wren_chan May 23 2020, 06:35:00 UTC

Between tardis_mole being an active LJ correspondent as I work my way through their reuploads, and your own attentiveness to ao3 comments, it occurred to me that there was absolutely no reason not to comment on lj-only stories, particularly as this marks my ... fourth time rereading this delightful series in as many months! XD There are so many points of delight in them, from little things like imagining Catherine Tate in Nine's outfit to the big ones like figuring out how the timelines altered. And I never get tired of the reminder that you put the clue right there in the title for all to see. ♥

tkel_paris January 10 2021, 06:35:00 UTC

Thank you! So sorry I somehow missed this comment. I have been thinking about bringing this over, although tardis_mole's own experience has factored into delaying. However, it could happen; there needs to be more Doctor/Donna in whatever form it takes. :D And yes, there were SO many little bits to delight in writing. I may have snickered more than a few times. 0:)