FIC: Assumptions Burst (6/13) - A Much Ado About Nothing fic

Dec 28, 2015 17:53

Title: Assumptions Burst
Genre: MAAN
Rating: T
Author: tkel_paris
Summary: The lives of Beatrice and Benedick are made more complicated by the presence of her father, who has plans for his only child. Plans she does not agree with.
Disclaimer: Don't own anything Shakespearean. Also don't have anything to do with the Josie Roarke production that I adore so ( Read more... )

rating = t, fanfic, sykira, shakespeare, maan, tardis-mole, fic!presents

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inward_audacity December 29 2015, 18:14:18 UTC
Uh-oh.

Firstly, I still can't get over how easily Claudio and Don Pedro believed Don John. He has proven himself to be unreliable and a liar. Why do they believe his words? Ugh. Men and their egos.

At least, Benedick can prove that he has seen Hero returning home with her family...

Olivio doesn't know his daughter or his wife for that matter at all, does he? I feel bad for both ladies. I wish Benedick could comfort Beatrice. I think after ten years of forced separation, they at least deserve that...

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tkel_paris December 29 2015, 20:24:47 UTC
Next chapter will be going up soon. So be ready...

The male ego proves itself such a fragile thing. If they knew more of how Leonato protected his child, or of Hero herself they would know enough to call Don Snake what he is. But he's experienced where his brother is concerned, and has read Claudio well.

Ah, yes.

Olivio's line is an old royal line, and so he thinks his daughter deserves better than to marry a younger son of a lord (who is effectively a commoner because he practically inherits nothing). Benedick must've seemed too up-and-coming to begin with ten years hence. And Olivio suffers too from this male pride and too little trust in a woman's word. But trust me... stay tuned...

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sykira February 2 2017, 22:08:57 UTC
Ah…so wonderful to finally come back to this amazing story! I have d/loaded it and and am typing comments offline as alas my internet access here in this field in the middle of nowhere leaves a lot to be desired. I’m glad though that I waited so long, in a way, because now I can savor it and not rush things (and wait til the kids are asleep so I can concentrate for longer than 60 seconds at a time ( ... )

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tkel_paris February 3 2017, 04:07:43 UTC
*squees* So happy to hear from you, my friend! And now I'm starting to hear what you thought of your fic!present! :DDDDDDD ( ... )

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