FIC: Assumptions Burst (3/13) - A Much Ado About Nothing fanfic

[tkel_paris]

Title: Assumptions Burst
Genre: MAAN
Rating: T/M (some violence within)
Author: tkel_paris
Summary: The lives of Beatrice and Benedick are made more complicated by the presence of her father, who has plans for his only child. Plans she does not agree with.
Disclaimer: Don't own anything Shakespearean. Also don't have anything to do with the Josie Roarke

Comments

[inward_audacity]

YAY! Another MAAN fic from you. And I'm so glad that I somewhat inspired this one.

I'm also sorry for only commenting now. It's been a crazy week.

I'm so excited for the rest of it. I love everything about it already.

Beatrice has a complete family and I love that she's still so stubborn and fiercely independent. For a moment, I thought she'd be a little softer/mellower since she didn't have to fend for herself as a child, but I love that she's still just as strong. Even her father who is so firm can't control her. Love his name by the way! Great choice.

I do really hate that he pushed Elena aside so easily and without a second thought. Has he ever laid hands on either of them? I hope not.

Also, how is Benedick still unworthy of Beatrice? He has served in a war and returned victorious. On top of that, he's the prince's right hand man. What more does Olivio want from him?

I can't wait for more! Thanks for sharing, sweetheart.

[tkel_paris]

Oh, I wouldn't have written this one without your influence. :)

All is forgiven. IF you're able to leave comments on the first two chapters, especially what you think of my OC, it'd be like a Christmas present to me. :D

Given how iron-fisted Leonato seemed I could only imagine Olivio being more so, which would in a way heighten Beatrice's independence because she sees a stronger threat to her wishes and more reason to mourn not being a man. Glad you like the name.

Read on. More will become clear.

Again, you'll see.

Welcome. :DDDDD