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Fic: The Suspension

Feb 21, 2011 00:23

Title: The Suspension
Pairing: Steve/Danny
Genre: Pre-slash
Rating: PG-13 for swearing
Word count: 4998
This is part 1. Part 2 coming soon.

( Seriously, this thing just kept going so I decided to make it a multi-parter. Here's the first part. There is a slight )

life and fic

Comments 37

leupagus February 21 2011, 06:35:40 UTC

So cute! I can't wait for the rest of this.

tjournal February 21 2011, 14:24:51 UTC

Me either!

*shakes brain to get the rest out*

jazzybabe56 February 21 2011, 23:31:14 UTC

me either!!

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tjournal February 21 2011, 14:25:58 UTC

Steve might have to break out the Ewok tree traps again for this one.

zortified February 21 2011, 14:09:38 UTC

I absolutely adore the 'don't touch can't have' angst. One of my favorite evers. Poor Danny! I almost want his angst to go on and on so I can reveal in it. ;) But not more than I want Steve to figure things out and jump him.

tjournal February 21 2011, 14:27:31 UTC

Mine too!

I promise to give enough time to roll around in Danny's angst before Steve connects the dots. And there is jumping.

kare February 21 2011, 15:05:01 UTC

Really love it, T. I like your subtle humor with both of the guys. My favorite of this last part was Steve on the phone with Chin and then BEER COMMERCIAL! =D

Now, the next thing you need to do is unlock this puppy and link it on a comm! Because you need to share.

tjournal February 21 2011, 15:11:57 UTC

All Steve knows about civillian relationships he learned from the commercials during a Super Bowl. True story.

Ahhhh - it's so hard for me to share my fic! Publish a novel, fine. Post fic, I waffle.

Crazy. LOL

(But I will!)

kare February 21 2011, 15:21:18 UTC

I know authors aren't *supposed* to care about getting glowy remarks about their fic. And to be honest, I've learned to live without it in this fandom unless I'm writing Steve/Danny, and then only when I write Steve/Danny in a certain way (cause my fic isn't everyone's cup of tea, I know this).

But that said, whether it's PC to admit it, there's nothing like seeing your inbin fill up with folks saying nice things about something you worked hard on.

You worked hard on this. It's awesome Steve/Danny, which folks will eat up I guarantee you. And you deserve the praise it will garner.

Take a chance. Easier said then done, I know. But you deserve it. Let folks read your wonderful words.

I'll shut up now! =D

tjournal February 21 2011, 15:28:03 UTC

You can't write to get praise but there's nothing that says you can't enjoy it afterwards. ;)

I unlocked it and posted a link to the fandom blow out - it's a good first step. LOL

I was thinking of posting it to at least one comm. Which one would you recommend?

Thread 5

embroiderama February 21 2011, 15:10:12 UTC

This is ridiculously awesome! There are so many lines I could quote, but I'm going with this one:

pull out sofa designed by angry hateful people

Heee! Yes.

tjournal February 21 2011, 15:12:45 UTC

Steve wants to know what the Geneva Convention has to say about Danny's apartment....

And thank you!