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tir_synni

FF7: Secrets Ch. XIV

Mar 15, 2007 18:19

Secrets: Ch. XIV

Nine years ago

He was just another trooper in line, Cloud knew. Nothing important; nothing memorable. His dreams of being unique had died with the standard uniform and helmet. Standing in line now, watching anonymous trooper after anonymous trooper being systematically demolished by the so-called hand-to-hand specialist, Cloud ( Read more... )

ff7, fic, sephcloud

Comments 18

athyestean March 17 2007, 12:23:40 UTC

Oh my god, you wrote my new OTP Greed!Ling and Ed, and you also write Sephiroth and Cloud. My god... I think I love you. *cries*

It is just so beautiful.

P.S. I friended you.

tir_synni March 17 2007, 16:02:35 UTC

Greed!Ling/Ed . . . *purrs happily* Yeah, what was the conversation again?

^^ Thank you. And no problem.

athyestean March 18 2007, 01:07:08 UTC

Basically I damned you for making me spend the next three days reading just Ling and Ed fiction in this story about Greed!Ling and Ed having sex while Colonel Mustang waited outside the building trying "rescue" them. I think it was a gift fic for someone.

dareetel December 5 2007, 07:39:26 UTC

For some odd reason, out of all your writings, I had avoided this story until now (I have no idea why). While I would love to know that this would be continued, I also just wanted to let you know how enjoyable it was up to this point.

I do love Cloud's reaction to Zack's reappearance and I also enjoyed your early portrayal of Tifa. I also find it telling that once she realizes that Cloud and Seph were lovers that her first reaction was "I never stood a chance" and not "OMG! He had to kill the man he loved and listen to us spew venemous words of hatet about him".

Anyway, just wanted to tell you how much I liked the story.

Great FIC ^O^ silver666 May 31 2009, 05:12:34 UTC

Can't wait for the next chapter XD, but where's Ch.1-9?

beruthiels_cats July 19 2009, 01:09:59 UTC

Absolutely brilliant. I am having a really tough time trying to decide which I like best, this one, or 'Side Effects', lol...so I am not going to choose! Deftly executed, exceedinly well thought out, totally believeable. So very much hope either of these will no languish for very long, I am utterly captivated, and desperately wanting to know what happens next in each. Lengthy, plot driven tales seem to be such an exception, and so very welcome when they are found. As much as I enjoy single-chapter forays into the erotica realm, these are the kind of stories I cherish, where all elements are so expertly woven into a whole that makes them truly shine. PLEASE continue!