On the Fields of Freedoms Edge - Chapter 4

[tipsy_armadillo]

Title: On the Fields of Freedoms Edge
Rating: R
Pairing: Megatron/Optimus Prime
Warning: Mentions of non-con, mpreg (highlight for warnings, spoilers)
Summary: TF Prime. Optimus goes to extreme measures to stop Megatron once and for all

Comments

[tipsy_armadillo]

*hugs* It'll probably maybe possibly get better.
Aw, who am I kidding, I hate sad Megatron. D:

[tipsy_armadillo]

Thanks! It can be a bit of a challenge to write the voice right. It was one of the reasons I was hesitant to write a TFP fic, both Megatron and Optimus speak in very distinct ways, very formal almost.

[mmouse15]

Well, this was an unexpected development, but yes, Megatron finally understands what it means to truly love another because what he's doing will be the best for Orion.

And what a way to spring the news on Optimus.

[tipsy_armadillo]

Haha, right out of left field. Btw Prime, you're a daddy, now come get yo kid.
Somebody needs to write a crack fic like that, Prime being the deadbeat baby daddy and Megatron going after him for child support. Starscream could be the heart of gold social worker that brings the family together.

Thanks for reviewing!

[swordage]

I won't lie, I choked up a little. Of course Megatron can't admit to anyone other than Orion that he cares. Of course he has to frame his supposed weakness as hatred and spite. Oh, Megatron.

This is desperately sad and I really hope he remembers to mention Orion's name before he's taken away :C

[tipsy_armadillo]

I'm sorry I made you choke up :(
Hopefully next chapter won't be quite as sad. This what happens when I don't write crack fics, I end up writing horrible tragedy. D:
Thanks for reviewing. :)

[zuzeca]

It took me a long time to come up with a comment that wasn't just, "Oh god, my heart." x_x This is lovely and it really feels like you've captured Megatron in pain here. Can't wait to see more. <3

[tipsy_armadillo]

Thank you! I'm glad I managed to tug at your heartstrings a bit (in a good way I hope lol).