you didn't get to heaven, but you made it close, chapter 4

[tipah]

there's depictions of violence here - like, violence - and it's a pretty dark chapter, with new people in the mix. you has been warned.

| you didn't get to heaven, but you make it close, pt 4 |[gossip girl | r | everyone. like srsly. plus ofcs and omcs. nate/serena | au, violence, mafia!van der woodsens, law-enforcers!archibalds, hxc-mafia!erik

Comments

[isa_bella3]

omg this was amazing ;D;D
love love LOVE the ending!

i can't wait until they accually face each other couse now everyone's just gonna think nate's loosing it... seeing his dead girlfriend.

can't wait for more ;D you write this perfectly! <33

[tipah]

heh heh ikr? it's not going to be easy for nate to convince everyone that his dead girlfriend is alive.

thank you so much for still reading! :D

[kikis2]

Ooh! Carter!! Lily pimping her daughter out was beyond awesome, and so something she'd do. S/Ca are <333. Sorry Nate.

Am really looking forward to the eventual N/S showdown. But jeez S, can't you play dead better than that?

Can't wait for more!

[tipah]

lily pimps with love. trufax. ooh you're more of a S/Ca fan than an N/S fan?

S did succeed in playing dead for 5 years, but then Erik wanted to go to that coffee shop she keeps on gushing about D:

[kikis2]

I like N/S but my true love will always be drama. And on the show Ca/S def have more scandal potential. But for this story N/S is proly in lead for destructive capabilities ; )

Ah well, worse case scenario, jail-by-coffee is a totally worthy way to go lol.

[tipah]

ah yes Ca/S was all about scandal. minimal schmoop there.

But for this story N/S is proly in lead for destructive capabilities ; )
TRUE. kind of screwed up without even trying D:

[tipah]

you're so sweet! thanks so much!

aww i love you too! :D

[sugarskyhigh]

BEFORE I READ I JUST WANNA SAY 'YAAAAAAAAY OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!' :DDDDDDD

[sugarskyhigh]

WHY HELLO THERE, CLIFFIE.

“Why do you want to know so badly anyway? Oh, I’ll accept the two hundred thousand, by the way. Just answer my question. I’m curious.”
WOW AT THE LILY/CARTER CONVERSATION. And can I just say how amused I am by how carelessly he says this? LOL, oh killing is nothing, yeah, I'm Carter Baizen, yada yada yada, 200k plz?

BB, YOU ARE SO AWESOME. LOVE HOW YOU WRITE THIS.

“My daughter’s ex is a fed.”
LMAO OH. xD

TORTURE REFERENCES WHOAH.
AND YAAAY TO VANESSA HATING.

OMG RANDOM THOUGHT. IS RUFUS GONNA BE IN HERE? :O

Now you've got me thinking about Erik's ass too dammit.

AND THE LAST SCENE. I HAVE NO WORDS GAAAAH.

[tipah]

AHAHAH i apologize for mah eevhulness. cliffies are so tempting.

carter baizen believes that he is the shiz. when people try to take him down, he usually says 'i'm carter baizen, bitch,' and knocks them all out.

TORTURE REFERENCES WHOAH.
AND YAAAY TO VANESSA HATING.
HEH i couldn't have a non-violence mafia story, unfortunately. and i TRIED to make vanessa a normal human but CLEARLY this is not possible XD

RUFUS. hmmm. i honestly have no idea. :S

ERIK'S ASS IS AWESOME. TRUTH, NOT TRUFAX. and nate's crusade for serena is ONNNNN

[germangirl89]

hija hun...

so I can't wait until the final showdown... but I do hope that they meet alone you know not like there are a ton of mafia or da people around...

wow again heavy torture... and I just ate :( ;)

lols at cater... but I do hope u don't make this a S/C story... not even for the shortest while... pretty please?

[tipah]

hi hon! oh man the final showdown is a long way to go, i think. i honestly haven't even thought about it :P

BAH i should warn people like "DON'T READ AFTER YOU JUST ATE" or smth. sorry!

haha we'll see how the crazy goes!