If I ever manage to finish the sequels... then yes, you did just read that. If I don't manage to do that, then... umm... you didn't? That definitely made more sense in my head.
But thank you! The relationship between them ended up a lot more awkward than I first intended, but I think I like it all the better for it. :)
I loved the portraying of Harry and John's relationship, even Bobby was brilliant, though the ending does leave me... unsatisfied... BUt yeah, great piece.
Well, that's it... for now. There's supposed to be a sequel, but I'm not very good at getting those written. unikorento promised to keep poking at me till I finish it though, so I'm hopeful. :D
No, he didn't really die. At least not in a permanent way. (At least he's supposed to be up and running for that sequel I really mean to write.)
And thanks. I'm glad you liked it. In a way the ending is supposed to be unsatisfying, but I realise that if I was reading the story I'd be entirely frustrated by it myself. So, yeah...
Thank you. And I'm glad to know the story was enjoyable even when you're not too familiar with the other fandom (have a tendency to read crossovers like that myself).
seriously, this fic. *shakes head* i am so in love with this fic, it is beautiful, the plot is sooooooooo interesting and the writing is perfect and i just love it. it's really hard to find a story like this where not only the plot is good, but there are no distracting things like bad grammar - i don't know why but bad grammar in a story just annoys and distract me so much that i can't read it even if it's got the best plot. absolutely love out of time though~
omg please write more!! there are so many things i'm curious about!
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I feel like I just read Part 1 of a Major Epic!
Other that that, I love the uneasy relationship between Harry and John. How John feels uneasy about it but still feels something for Harry anyway.
And Bobby was his grumpy old self.
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But thank you! The relationship between them ended up a lot more awkward than I first intended, but I think I like it all the better for it. :)
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Did Harry die there ?
I loved the portraying of Harry and John's relationship, even Bobby was brilliant, though the ending does leave me... unsatisfied...
BUt yeah, great piece.
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No, he didn't really die. At least not in a permanent way. (At least he's supposed to be up and running for that sequel I really mean to write.)
And thanks. I'm glad you liked it. In a way the ending is supposed to be unsatisfying, but I realise that if I was reading the story I'd be entirely frustrated by it myself. So, yeah...
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Wow. The story's brilliant, wonderfully crafted, and I love the way you portray the relationships between Bobby and Harry and John and Harry.
but...please tell me there will be more...
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As long as unikorento keeps prodding me about the sequel (like she promised), there should eventually be more.
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seriously, this fic. *shakes head* i am so in love with this fic, it is beautiful, the plot is sooooooooo interesting and the writing is perfect and i just love it. it's really hard to find a story like this where not only the plot is good, but there are no distracting things like bad grammar - i don't know why but bad grammar in a story just annoys and distract me so much that i can't read it even if it's got the best plot. absolutely love out of time though~
omg please write more!! there are so many things i'm curious about!
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My sequel writing is incredibly slow, but hopefully I'll eventually get it done.
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