Oh wow. I am so in love. This was EXACTLY Finn's voice. And I heard Kurt saying every single line, too. So besides that preliminary check, hello, you're also an impressive writer. You made everything flow naturally, and for Finn, well, it couldn't be filled with long fuzzy rants about nature or anything deep -much less would it have been appropriate to use words longer than three syllables, so I'm glad you kept the style simply - and yet you managed to still write skillfully. I was entertained and every time that Finn had his gay! moments it made me warm inside. In all the right places. You know what I mean
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Love this story! The Kurt and Finn voices in it are spot on. One tiny typo that I saw: grabbing his bottle of win and pouring it into cups. Although, Kurt could be carrying around win. Never know :)
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grabbing his bottle of win and pouring it into cups.
Although, Kurt could be carrying around win. Never know :)
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*icon loff!*
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And the narrative in Finn's voice was spot on! LOVELY!!
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