Grey (2/2)

[tinpra]

aka my NaNo novel continued. As I mentioned this isn't completed, and it's chock full of whatever mistakes I made the first go around. I do like this story, however, so I hope to pick it up again and finish it somewhere.

Head to foot in the intermediate gray of position, Janelle was on one knee on the other side of Father’s desk, waiting to be

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[klcthebookworm]

Interesting world you've developed here. You should finish it.

[tinpra]

Thanks! I want to.