White Collar Fic: Fragile

Sep 03, 2010 09:06

Title: Fragile
Author: tinnuial 
Rating: PG
Warning: Reference to off-screen violence
Summary: An op goes south. Jones observes the aftermath. My first White Collar fic!

Prequel: Mea Culpa

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Fragile pingback_bot September 5 2010, 21:21:17 UTC
User tinnuial referenced to your post from Fragile saying: [...] e to off-screen violence Summary: An op goes south. Jones observes the aftermath. A/N: My first White Collar fic! Enjoy! Peter wasn't saying anything, but Jones knew how to put two and two together. [...]

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daniel_shadow September 5 2010, 21:49:13 UTC
I like this story!!

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tinnuial September 6 2010, 19:41:06 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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photoash September 5 2010, 22:05:53 UTC
I like how different your fic is :) Taking on the difficult subject matter of PTSD and using Jones as our pov character were bold moves and they paid off well here <3

I really liked how you kept the drama understated and that Jones never knew exactly what had happened to Neal :)

Thanks for sharing!

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tinnuial September 6 2010, 19:46:55 UTC
Thank you! I'm a huge fan of your "Secrets" series and it made my day to see your comment in my inbox :)

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deepbluemermaid September 5 2010, 22:18:27 UTC
Ohh, my heart. Poor Neal! I like Jones' POV on the situation, and his concerned but careful approach to Neal during a flashback. This is very well done :) I hope you write more White Collar fic...

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tinnuial September 6 2010, 19:55:12 UTC
Thank you! I really like the character of Jones and there just isn't enough fic with him in it. I'd love to write more WC fic...but it's been years since I wrote anything and I'm very much out of practice. We'll see how it goes :)

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talitha78 September 5 2010, 22:44:49 UTC
Great story!

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tinnuial September 6 2010, 19:55:49 UTC
Thank you! :)

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