Title: Fragile Author: tinnuial Rating: PG Warning: Reference to off-screen violence Summary: An op goes south. Jones observes the aftermath. My first White Collar fic!
User tinnuial referenced to your post from Fragile saying: [...] e to off-screen violence Summary: An op goes south. Jones observes the aftermath. A/N: My first White Collar fic! Enjoy! Peter wasn't saying anything, but Jones knew how to put two and two together. [...]
I like how different your fic is :) Taking on the difficult subject matter of PTSD and using Jones as our pov character were bold moves and they paid off well here <3
I really liked how you kept the drama understated and that Jones never knew exactly what had happened to Neal :)
Ohh, my heart. Poor Neal! I like Jones' POV on the situation, and his concerned but careful approach to Neal during a flashback. This is very well done :) I hope you write more White Collar fic...
Thank you! I really like the character of Jones and there just isn't enough fic with him in it. I'd love to write more WC fic...but it's been years since I wrote anything and I'm very much out of practice. We'll see how it goes :)
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I really liked how you kept the drama understated and that Jones never knew exactly what had happened to Neal :)
Thanks for sharing!
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