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obisgirl July 31 2011, 13:39:40 UTC
nice. very well-done.

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tinmiss1939 July 31 2011, 16:37:22 UTC
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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queencestqueen July 31 2011, 17:54:59 UTC
Loved it! I know you said friendship, but my shipper saw it differently. ;) I just love your Gary and Rachel voices!

I hope you don't mind, but I added this one to the fanforum thread too.

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tinmiss1939 July 31 2011, 19:06:40 UTC
Oh--this is totally shipping Gary/Rachel. I guess this is really pre-ship? Because I'm not sure they know what they're feeling for each other yet.

I'm glad the voices sound true to you. The actors are defining the characters quite well, so I'm trying to do that some kind of justice. And you can add my work to that thread all you like!

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queencestqueen July 31 2011, 22:32:24 UTC
Oh, okay, so I didn't miss read it. That's good and I'll add all of your G/R work as soon as it is up. I love it.

I am glad this ship is taking off. I was afraid I would be the only shipper.

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time_and_fate July 31 2011, 18:58:51 UTC
Oh, so loved this one. Gary-in-Peril may be my new favorite thing to read, so feel free to keep writing it!!

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tinmiss1939 August 3 2011, 14:16:20 UTC
Oh, thanks! And, yes, Gary-in-peril is fun. He's one of those characters that you just know will get abused by fangirls. I can't explain it so I'm just going with it.

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moonvoice August 10 2011, 09:52:49 UTC
I'm here belatedly; but I agree! I came to look for Alphas fanfiction specifically to find Gary-in-peril fics! Can't wait to start writing some (need to finish a Misfits hurt/comfort fic first!)

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tinmiss1939 August 3 2011, 14:18:39 UTC
You're very welcome. I'm glad the POVs worked for you.

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moonvoice August 10 2011, 09:53:26 UTC
A wonderful story, and a great sense of both of the character's voices. I love all the visceral details - Gary's hand trembling, and the air tasting 'wrong.' Such a great fic!

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