To Find a Purpose, Dissonance

May 25, 2008 11:15

Title: To Find a Purpose
Team: Longcoats
Length: 100
Table Number:  03
Prompt: Gem
Characters: Cain and Glitch

“We appreciate you trying to help, Glitch, but you can’t cut into serious discussions with jokes and harebrained schemes.”

“That’s a gem of a thought!  I should sit here like a lump of mobat droppings while everyone else does ( Read more... )

prompt table 01 longcoats, length: small, prompt table challenge 01

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koslorollo May 25 2008, 18:28:16 UTC
You're writing some drabbles! *jigs* It's nice to see you about!

And I love these two. And these two. Your characterization of both Glitch and Cain just brings a huge grin to my face.

No worries about the posting time... I'm working tonight, anyhow, and the challenge won't close until... I don't know... As late as possible. 10:30? 11? Midnight? Something like that...

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oddsbobs June 3 2008, 03:55:56 UTC
Thanks so much! It's been a while since I've done drabbles, and I feel a bit rusty. These two were the ones that were the closest to finished (at least as finished as I wanted them to be), and I still feel iffy about them.

I'm determined to get back into the swing of things, though! :D

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lionille June 1 2008, 21:57:11 UTC
Oh, these were awesome! This was such a perfect bit of characterization:

Cain was still fiddling with his hat, however, which meant he had more to say.

And this....this made me laugh like crazy, it is exactly what Glitch would say to Cain right before rebrainment:

I guarantee you that you can’t get rid of me that easily.

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oddsbobs June 3 2008, 03:57:01 UTC
Thanks! I'm always so happy when people think I've got the characterization right. :D

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