Farewell

May 15, 2008 16:32

Title: Farewell
Team: Tin Men
Prompt: Innocence (Table 1)
Word Count: 387
Disclaimer: A happy birth-anniversary to L. Frank Baum, the man who brought Oz to our world. Another special thanks goes to Long-Mitchell and Van Sickle who gave us the Outer Zone. This is a non-profit fan work.
A/N - I use the name "Ozma Galinda" for the Queen.

Ambrose loved his ( Read more... )

drabbles by: allronix1, prompt table challenge 01, prompt table 01 tin men, length: medium

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moony_blues May 15 2008, 23:47:59 UTC
*sniffle*

Wow...amazingly done! *adding to mems* =)

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lionille May 16 2008, 01:04:50 UTC
Oh, wow! What a painful notion that Ambrose wasn't in on the secret, and what he would have suffered.
Princess Dorothy wasn't just Galinda's little angel of light. She was his as well.
This was beautiful!

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allronix1 May 16 2008, 01:16:43 UTC
If he knew, then the Witch would have pried that knowledge out of his mind like everything else. That's another potential bit of fallout. Intellectually, he will know the Queen made the right call in keeping it from him. Emotionally, it will likely sting that he was kept in the dark.

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lattelady6 May 16 2008, 18:28:48 UTC
Beautiful and the last line is filled with irony. I really love the stories that take place when DG was a child and include Cain. Being the CDG shipper that I am I always see it as forshadowing.

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allronix1 May 16 2008, 21:25:46 UTC
Yeah. I piled on the irony here. Neither gent knows the coffin is empty. They can't know that they'll cross paths under equally "pleasant" circumstances. They also have no way of knowing that the Regent's offhand advice will hit painfully close to home.

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4thdixiechick May 16 2008, 20:47:07 UTC
meep!
Poor Ambrose...

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amedia July 29 2009, 22:46:00 UTC
This is extraordinarily well done. I love the way you've done Ambrose's perspective and his interactions with the royal family, and his reaction to Cain.

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