Minimal At Best

[candacestls]

Title: Minimal At Best
Team: Tin Men
Length: 499 words
Table Number: prompt table 2
Prompt: Minimal
Rating: PG-13 for suggestions of sex between two men
Warnings: Slash, Wyatt/Glitch
Notes: Too many doctors visits makes everyone edgy.....

Minimal

“’Minimal at best’ is what they told me! ‘Minimal at best‘! What kind of bedside manner is that? I wait 15

Comments

[lionille]

Oh! This was beautiful! I love Glitch's last line there, it made me laugh, but it's also a nice flipping of the opening phrase, I love how he turned it into something humorous. That is so Glitch.
I also loved this action of Cain's:
patting Glitch’s thigh with his right hand as he drove with his left.
That's just such a... I don't know... simple but very intimate gesture. You can just feel the love.

[candacestls]

Thanks hon! I was beginning to think everyone had been kidnapped by aliens or something, LOL. As for this piece, they sound very married don't they :D?

[lionille]

rofl! Maybe it was just an odd posting time?
They do sound very married here, and in a good way. The best kind of way.

[amedia]

Ooh, I love how this begins and ends with the same three words in completely different contexts!

I also love how Cain, who is usually so taciturn, becomes talkative when he's faced with Glitch's despair, and how perceptive Glitch is in noticing.