Non-challenge - Fishing

Jun 21, 2009 10:47

Title: Fishing
Team: DeMilo [aka NONE]
Word Count: 200
Characters: Jeb and Adora (mention of Wyatt and a couple OCs)
Challenge: none
Note: Inspired by Happy Father's Day Mama by Michael Peterson, which makes me cry, every time.

They hadn't gotten around to fishing yet. )

drabbles by: erinm_4600, non-challenge drabbles

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rissy_james June 21 2009, 15:20:46 UTC
*is floored*

The last line went and broke my heart, I think.

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erinm_4600 June 21 2009, 17:04:06 UTC
The song broke me the first time I heard it...

I've been contemplating a way to use it for a while, and then a lightbulb went off late last night.

*snuggles*

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amedia July 4 2009, 23:42:29 UTC
rissy_james is absolutely right! *nodnod* It's the last line!

The first part is quite good and entertaining and even heartwarming and then you get to the end and erinm_4600 just ... transforms it magically so that we remember what happened next and it's sad and the part that was originally heartwarming becomes bittersweet. It's quite a transformation.

edited to fix erin's username

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erinm_4600 July 4 2009, 23:44:40 UTC
I'm NOT crying! The room is dusty and I have allergies, okay?! :\

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