Title: Fishing
Team: DeMilo [aka NONE]
Word Count: 200
Characters: Jeb and Adora (mention of Wyatt and a couple OCs)
Challenge: none
Note: Inspired by
Happy Father's Day Mama by Michael Peterson, which makes me cry, every time.
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They hadn't gotten around to fishing yet. )
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The last line went and broke my heart, I think.
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I've been contemplating a way to use it for a while, and then a lightbulb went off late last night.
*snuggles*
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The first part is quite good and entertaining and even heartwarming and then you get to the end and erinm_4600 just ... transforms it magically so that we remember what happened next and it's sad and the part that was originally heartwarming becomes bittersweet. It's quite a transformation.
edited to fix erin's username
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