Prequel to As Lovers Go 6

Feb 23, 2011 21:40

*Sorry this has taken so long. I'm writing this story out of order....so I have updates done that aren't ready to be posted yet and it gets confusing. I write as the muse hits ( Read more... )

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nyre1 February 24 2011, 20:04:04 UTC
Sorry it's taken me so long to catch up. I've been in the hospital and then not able to get to my computer. I have really missed this story. I love it greatly and am really looking forward to more.

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tinkrella25 February 25 2011, 04:32:53 UTC
Oh no!! I hope you are okay. I think the hospital is a pretty damn good excuse! I really hope you are okayy!

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tv_fan_girl February 25 2011, 00:50:21 UTC
This is a wonderful chapter. I can actually feel his regret. I really am glad that you updated it. I keep checking everyday to see if there's more!! This is a wonderful story!!

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tinkrella25 February 25 2011, 04:33:57 UTC
I'm glad you could feel it. By the end of this one, I want you to be able to really see where they are coming from in the actual story, the claire one. You may have to re-read it after all this is said and done. lol

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zooey_nyc February 26 2011, 11:45:04 UTC
I am absolutely loving this story, please keep writing :) Your writing elicits real emotion and it is all grey, nothing is black and white. I cannot wait for the next chapter!

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gemlily5 February 27 2011, 12:43:57 UTC
I'm sure she's had to clean up for him on many occasions. It's sad to see that he constantly struggles to keep straight for her. Boy,he has such a messed up life here.To think that this is pre-Clair!
Great job you did with this chapter. Please continue with this. Mind you it may take us readers some time to review but don't worry, we'll still keep reading.

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cheysma2000 June 2 2011, 03:41:11 UTC
Your story telling skills are outstanding. You have the ability to show a scene from all points of view. Thank you for all your hard work.

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