I don't know where to even start. This was great....wow! I know it's fiction but, imagining them doing a Bones movie about 10 years after the show ends. It brings up alot of conflicts alot of stress. On top of that,poor David, struggling with feelings on how to propose to Emily that night after having had that public fight. What a challenge!
You brought it all together so realistically. At this rate, I don't even know if he's going to get up the courage to propose to her.It would have to be uniquely them in how it's gone about.
I can't wait to see how you will be finishing this story. It's a wonderful story.
The next chapter is the last? Aww, sadness. But somehow fitting.
I loved them returning to their old ways, bickering on set. And even if she was right--that sometimes, they'll need space apart--they came back together at the end of the day.
I know this isn't real life and I know chances of events in this fic happening are pretty slim but stiiilll...in my head, they will. =P
awww what a nice way to wake up on a Sunday morning just what I needed to wake me up. See even if they are pissed as hell with each other during the day at the end of the day they still end up together just the way it should be are you going to write a sequel to this story or not? I'm going to miss this story after the final chapter :(
I'm sure I'll write a sequel/update of sorts eventually! Right now, I'm focusing on the pre-quel which I personally like even more. It's different. No kid-lets (except for his kids) and un-reformed David. Well, a David on the path to reforming.
Oooh now I'm intriged I hope you eventually write an update/sequel to this story so we know how things go for them but now I really want to read the pre-Claire story for David on the path to redemption
If I do Claire sequel....I think it will probably be little snippets here and there as the kids grow up. I imagine....that life will throw them even more twists and turns as their blended family ages. I can already imagine, in my head, the age when claire really starts to realize that David is not her actual father. I am intrigued by that and will surely have to write it!
Writing a reforming David is fun. The pre-quel really allows me to delve into him a bit because it's not all sunshine and rainbows and fluff. Although, I think knowing that Claire and the twins are the outcome of it all makes it better.
sigh. I kinda wish bones had started at the end and then showed us how they got there. I'd be able to enjoy it more in retrospect
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I loved them fighting on the set.
Too bad he didn't get to propose, maybe he will find another perfect moment!
Thanks. I can't wait until the next and final chapter!
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You brought it all together so realistically.
At this rate, I don't even know if he's going to get up the courage to propose to her.It would have to be uniquely them in how it's gone about.
I can't wait to see how you will be finishing this story. It's a wonderful story.
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I loved them returning to their old ways, bickering on set. And even if she was right--that sometimes, they'll need space apart--they came back together at the end of the day.
I know this isn't real life and I know chances of events in this fic happening are pretty slim but stiiilll...in my head, they will. =P
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j/k. thanks for the reviews. you guys rock!
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Writing a reforming David is fun. The pre-quel really allows me to delve into him a bit because it's not all sunshine and rainbows and fluff. Although, I think knowing that Claire and the twins are the outcome of it all makes it better.
sigh. I kinda wish bones had started at the end and then showed us how they got there. I'd be able to enjoy it more in retrospect
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