Comments | tinkertoo: Fic: Colors of a Bruise [Cookleta, r, one-shot]

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Fic: Colors of a Bruise [Cookleta, r, one-shot]

Apr 25, 2009 16:59

Title: Colors of a Bruise
Author: Zach //tinkertoo
Pairings: David Archuleta/OMC, David Cook/David Archuleta
Rating: R
Summary: David's boyfriend is a sweetheart...in public. When they're alone, David fears for his life. When he and Cook meet up again in Manilla, will things get better for him or will they only get worse?
Warnings: abuse and a shitload of ( Read more... )

fic: one shots, pairing: cookleta, fandom: idol

Comments 27

clover71 April 26 2009, 00:36:27 UTC

i hate james. really i do. can i like punch him myself?

i love cook. really i do. can i like kiss him on the cheek?

i love archie. really i do. can i like hug him?

ohh...this is so beautiful. poor archiekins to have a boyfriend who is apparently the president of the jerkoid club. but i'm glad he ended up with the president of the hottie organization.

tinkertoo April 26 2009, 03:07:27 UTC

haha. sure, you can punch James & hug Archie. Archie may have some problems with kissing Cook, but you can try =P

hehe, thank you! jerkoid club - 0, hottie organization - 500000000 (just for having Cook as the prez xP)

entropy0809 April 26 2009, 02:12:21 UTC

This is awesome!

tinkertoo April 26 2009, 03:07:52 UTC

thank you!

(hi Frankie icon! =P)

amccoy1972 April 26 2009, 05:32:17 UTC

Oh WOW I really really liked this. Total angst, and very solid writing. Sequel? How will Cookie help Archie get over this?

tinkertoo April 26 2009, 23:46:50 UTC

thank you!

uhm...probably not. i'll think about it, but i dunno how well the sequel would be

motherendurance April 26 2009, 06:00:59 UTC

Wow! I am with ammccoy, this really deserves a sequel. It was really well done, not over the top, and I think you really conveyed that the emotional was even worse then the physical. Also, Cookie made me melt into a pile of awwww.

Loved it!

tinkertoo April 26 2009, 23:47:46 UTC

thank you!

not too sure about a sequel. possibly, but i doubt it.

penrith1 April 26 2009, 09:44:34 UTC

Perfect ending. Cookie to the rescue is one of my fav scenarios. You captured very well the angst of the victim thinking it's something they deserve. Also how plausible abusers are in public. Well done. Thank goodness Arch is safe now.

tinkertoo April 26 2009, 23:48:26 UTC

thank you! yes, Archie is finally safe with Cookie for good, the perfect ending to anything =P