Comments | tinkerbell99: Lost Fic - Castling

tinkerbell99

Lost Fic - Castling - Jack, Locke, Walt

Oct 13, 2007 14:00

Title: Castling
Author: tinkerbell99
Rating: PG
Characters: Locke, Jack, Walt
Disclaimer: These characters are not mine, sadly.
Summary: A game of words and pawns. The pieces on this board can never be reset.

( Every game has an objective, Jack. )

fic, lost, locke, jack

Comments 11

crickets October 13 2007, 21:04:08 UTC

Damn that's eerie! I know this was well done because Locke made me want to shake him out of his riddles just like he does on the show. Haha. Really well-played. Awesome job, hon.

tinkerbell99 October 13 2007, 21:38:17 UTC

And I do love Locke and his riddles! Thanks so much for reading :-)

gottalovev October 13 2007, 22:53:29 UTC

Oh my god, this was fascinating.

probably the best Locke portrayal I've ever read *bookmarks*

wow. cryptic, and I love how you play on 2 fronts: Locke and Walt, and Locke and Jack.

greatly done. I cannot say that enough!

tinkerbell99 October 15 2007, 21:13:53 UTC

Thanks :-) I'm glad you liked the Locke portrayal...he's so darn tough to write!

nitesh_update October 13 2007, 23:38:21 UTC

Man oh man, you write Locke SO WELL. It sounds just like him. :D I really like this, well done!

tinkerbell99 October 15 2007, 21:15:25 UTC

Hee! Thanks! He's SO hard to get right - gotta have just the right amount of creepiness!

elliotsmelliot October 14 2007, 03:27:34 UTC

This was excellent. Nice juxtaposition between the two conversations. I'm trying to figure exactly which piece Locke considers himself. Are he and Jack even on the same board or are they playing different games? It's the type of question I would ponder between episodes!

tinkerbell99 October 15 2007, 21:18:12 UTC

LOL! Those are exactly the same things I obsess about, too! And I have to say that I wrote this thing and did think about which piece Locke is (or thinks he is) and which one Jack is and Walt, too...and I still have no idea. But I really like the idea of them playing different games...

(Okay, so now I want to take this thing and rewrite it and work all of that in!)

Thank you for your lovely feedback!

slybrunette October 14 2007, 21:31:52 UTC

You're probably the only person who can write Locke and make me interested at the same time. This was awesome! Great job sweetie!

tinkerbell99 October 15 2007, 21:19:10 UTC

Glad you liked it :-) I know Locke isn't everybody's cup of tea. I'm happy you were still interested!

slybrunette October 15 2007, 21:21:23 UTC

He just, erm, gets on my nerves on the show. But I can overlook that when it's you :)