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tinkabell007

Fic: Are You Ready to Give Up Everything - Chap. 6

Jan 23, 2006 13:39

Title: Are You Ready to Give Up Everything ( Read more... )

veronica maars, veronica mars, fanfiction

Comments 6

lapdogdesign January 23 2006, 16:12:25 UTC

Very good, as always.

I really enjoyed your description of Veronica's feelings about the L/V relationship and break up. I could see that holding true in canon.

Just saw a few grammar nitpicks, if you're interested. I will post them in a separate comment.

Can't wait to see where you go from here!

tinkabell007 January 23 2006, 17:27:57 UTC

Thank you so much!!! :-) The bad grammar is always fighting with me! *lol* (or is it the other way around? *g* ) Anyway, thank you for your help. I just edited the story. And I'm glad you like the story! :)

moirariordan January 24 2006, 01:00:25 UTC

Yay! Amazing as always, even though I've already read this. XD Great job.

tinkabell007 January 24 2006, 20:32:39 UTC

Aw, my lovely Beta!! :) Thank you!! Chap 7 is half done. I hope I'll get it to you within the next week.

one thing anonymous January 24 2006, 08:15:28 UTC

all i can say is
HURRY UP N WRITE THE REST!!!!!

la623 January 25 2006, 07:27:26 UTC

OH my gosh! WHO IS IT?!?! I finally got to read this and I love it! Please update soon! :)