Redwing

[tinhuviel]

I wrote a poem week before last, my first in ages. It's obvious I'm rusty. Grievously rusty...

REDWINGIt was not the melody

Comments

[falkenna]

I love this. I think your style has matured, rather than being rusty.

[tinhuviel]

Well, thank you.

your poem

[b_bopper55]

I like it. I know, when I write poetry, it hurts to cut even one word, yet there could be some culling done.
You are my inspiration.
Love you and this poem.

Re: your poem

[tinhuviel]

hahaha, that is culled. Oh gads, I told you I was rusty. But it really needed saying at the time I wrote it. we'll work on it some more when the time is right.