Comments | tinediserp: [Fanfic] - Tear an Image from the Picture

tinediserp

[Fanfic] - Tear an Image from the Picture

Jun 09, 2011 10:16

Title: Tear an Image from the Picture
Pairing: Netherlands -> Belgium
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Nation-incest, crossdressing, masturbation, mirrors, guilt, just an overall weird-ass fic.
Summary: …I don’t even know where to start.
Notes: For the purposes of this fic, Netherlands has green eyes. As far as canon goes they could be almost anything ( Read more... )

pairing: belgium/netherlands, fanfic, this is porn, *hides forever*

Comments 10

frenchfrogs June 9 2011, 16:35:49 UTC

I kind of really liked this. It's really well written and the whole action seemed so lively, it was nice to read~

tinediserp June 9 2011, 16:58:47 UTC

Ah, thanks! This was...really, really hard to write. Man I felt like a creeper the entire time.

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tinediserp June 10 2011, 10:43:34 UTC

LOL why thank you o7

Some of the credit for the idea should go to a friend of mine though; we were talking about Netherlands dressing up as his sister and it kind of soundboarded into this.

rosetteroulette June 9 2011, 19:09:33 UTC

Very well done. I feel so bad for him. =(

tinediserp June 10 2011, 10:43:56 UTC

Thanks!

Aw me too :(

fairywine June 10 2011, 09:11:58 UTC

You really did a wonderful job with the mood of the piece-just the right amount of desperate, twisted, so-wrong-so-right. If that makes any sense at all? tl;dr This was well done.

Also: Belgium companion piece where the stealing-of-clothes-and-using-them-unconventionally favor is returned to her brother would be...HNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG. My internet love doesn't exactly have a monetary value, but rest assured it would be forever yours if you went there.

tinediserp June 10 2011, 10:46:03 UTC

FUD;LKFJ thanks! Good to see it came across how it did in my head haha.

BUT HOW DO I WRITE BELGIUM?! D:

fairywine June 10 2011, 22:28:41 UTC

With a word processor? /bricked

I'm not really sure exactly what you mean, though. Character wise, or just how she'd go about doing such a thing, or something else?

tinediserp June 11 2011, 03:56:09 UTC

Yeah, I just don't know how to get into her head, really. I'd hate to mess it up.

tr0picall June 17 2011, 23:34:26 UTC

I liked this. Dutch seal of approval xD Poor Netherlands, no matter what we do, we can't get the Belgians to like us.... You write really well, and even though the story was kind of creepy (NL in ladies clothes O.o) I still enjoyed it a lot ^^