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TV One Shot - Mad World (Part Two)

Aug 03, 2012 21:24

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luvspnl August 6 2012, 02:26:02 UTC

:D Thanks! It is certainly not easy being a Winchester. (Not that I would want it to be, what fun would that be?) Thanks for reading!

brassband777 August 4 2012, 08:44:57 UTC

Brilliant! I loved seeing John's thoughts when he was trying to get to the bottom of what was wrong with Dean. I felt so sorry for Dean feeling like he'd been abandoned by John and was so happy that this was resolved by the end. I Loved John hugging Dean and telling him that he loved him :D And the ending was so sweet!

luvspnl August 6 2012, 02:27:35 UTC

I love writing John's thoughts. A lot of his actions are sometimes misunderstood and harsh, but his thoughts show how much he really cares! Thank you for reading and I am thrilled you enjoyed it :)

itsmecoon August 4 2012, 21:34:14 UTC

Poor Dean feeling like John disowned him. I felt bad for him. :(
Dean had to learn the hard way(as always)to just open up and tell dad what he wanted to know. John will always get the information he wants even if he has to beat it out of you.
Liked the story

luvspnl August 6 2012, 02:29:07 UTC

Yes, Dean has taken after his father in that neither knows how to just open up and TALK! Oh the troubles they could avoid if only. I'm glad you liked the story! Thanks for reading :)

joajohns17 June 13 2013, 20:25:18 UTC

I just wanted to stop in and tell you how much I love this story. It was one of the first ones that I read when I joined the community and wasn't into leaving comments. I really like this story, every aspect of it...I'm not really a fan of OCs but I really like yours. This verse is amazing, Keep 'em coming :)

luvspnl June 14 2013, 14:52:55 UTC

Thank you! I understand not leaving comments, but I'm glad to have them :) I've had plenty of times when I've tried leaving comments, but LJ is usually being mean to me. I understand OCs are hard to get behind. I've found some annoying myself. Which is why I stuck my OCs to one comm. Glad to have you onboard! I will slowly but surely keep the stories coming :)

wise_old_crone July 12 2013, 16:57:12 UTC

There, you get the button twice. I can't show my appreciation in a better way :-)

Part 2 was even better than part 1 and that was the best part of my day so far.

Thanks for posting :-D