fic: Jeff's Mysterious Friend

[timetraveled]

title: Jeff's Mysterious Friend
pairing: Amy/Rory (& Jeff. Bring him back, Moffat!)
words: 3589
rating: PG
note: written for the "blind date" square at schmoop_bingo~ Also, yay for passing my second year at uni with a 2:1! I celebrate with schmoopy fic! \o/

Comments

[eken95]

That felt so like them. Very nice. Thank you for sharing

[timetraveled]

You're welcome! Thanks for reading :)

[imagination55]

♥♥

More than the blind date which was very cute, I really loved the backstory you gave Rory's decision to become a nurse. He would totally use that reasoning for sure!

AND JEFF. It feels like so long since I watched TEH now that he seems like a distant memory. I agree, bring back Jeff for some comedy hijinks. Imagine him ringing up the Doctor because of some issue back in Leadworth/Earth and Amy/Rory are like WTF but the Doctor's just all knowing and pleased and "he's my best man". :'D

I WANT MY OWN RORY NAO PLZ. *swoons* (because it's even less likely for me to have my own Raggedy Doctor lol)

Another triumph, my sweets. :)

PS. OMG exploding TARDIS! Nice work.

[timetraveled]

I was watching TEH recently as well and writing this totally made me want Jeff brought back (make him a companion, Moffat!) because his scenes with the Doctor were hilarious, especially the bit where the Doctor was staring at him really closely (I really don't get why he did that, LOL, but it made my slashy heart happy anyways).

I'm really glad you liked Rory's reasoning for being a nurse and it was believable :) I want my own Rory too, omg. I still can't believe he guarded Amy for that long. That is some truly epic love there.

Eee, you picked up on the exploding TARDIS bit! I was hoping someone would :3 Thanks for reading this, I know it's quite long. ♥

[curlybeach]

"We'd have to leave out the naughty bits of the story to the grandkids."
Of course, he didn't realize what he'd accidentally said out loud until he noticed Amy staring at him.

Augh, so cute! I really like this; the blind date thing does sound like a Rory thing to do :D

[timetraveled]

Thank you! I can't take credit for coming up with the prompt since it was part of a bingo card but when I saw the prompt I thought it would fit Rory :)

[timetraveled]

Glad you think so :)

[professor_spork]

This is lovely-- so many great little moments. Her being bashful about opening the trenchcoat for him, understanding the difference in how he looked at her... so wonderfully them.

"Very accurate," Rory commented as he pulled up the handbrake and drove the car forwards. "I wear the exact same thing on duty."

"I've never seen you in one of those before."
"I think 'dress' is the word you're looking for," she replied teasingly.

Hee! Dialogue win.

[timetraveled]

Thanks for the lovely feedback! Glad the dialogue amused you :)