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U is for Understanding

Apr 05, 2009 11:22

Title: U is for Understanding
Fandom: Full Metal Alchemist
Rating: PG 13
Character(s): Shou Tucker, Edward Elric
Disclaimer: Don't own or claim to own FMA or any of the characters involved
Summary: All Shou Tucker has ever wanted is a little understanding...
Words: 132

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Comments 1

Constructive criticism nevacaruso April 6 2009, 14:02:57 UTC

Hm. This one doesn't work as well as the others did. Too many uses of the title word, and I think that Tucker - especially as you've characterized him - would feel more self-righteous ("It's their fault!") than lonely at the notion that nobody understands him. But that's just my interpretation, and I did like how he sees Edward as a potential protege and then a disappointment. Nice touch.