Could I Be You

May 19, 2010 02:15

Title: Could I Be You
Fandom: RPS
Characters: Jensen Ackles and Jared Padalecki
Prompt: 025. Strangers.
fanfic100 table: here
Word Count: 8,883
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Smex, some crack, and slight angst.
Summary: Jensen didn't really think that a childish wish on a coin would change much for him, but feeling invisible left him open to doing childish things ( Read more... )

nc-17, spn rps, j2, fanfic100

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spooky2_alex May 19 2010, 17:16:22 UTC
I loved it very much. How Jensen was invisible (oh, I can understand that too well that sometimes) and how after beig him again, Jared loves him the same. A beautiful story. Thanks!

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timehasa_way May 19 2010, 19:09:17 UTC
oh, I can understand that too well that sometimes
Me, too. *hugs*

Thank you!! :D

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dugindeep May 19 2010, 17:49:17 UTC
So much of this was sweet - I loved the scene in bed when Jared's apologizing for not finding him sooner, all cuddled up and sadly honest but hopeful. And then of course, in the most cracktastic way, I'm LOLing over the idgits line and all smiley again.

&hearts

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timehasa_way May 19 2010, 19:10:10 UTC
Hehehe, thank you so much, bb! I'm just glad it worked. It's been a while!

♥!

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timehasa_way May 19 2010, 19:10:39 UTC
Of course, happy endings!!! ♥

ILU2!

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fanofsuper May 19 2010, 18:15:38 UTC
That was great. I'm glad that Jared helped Jensen & that he stayed with him after the wish was over. It really is true love!

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timehasa_way May 19 2010, 19:11:00 UTC
Thank you! It really is! :D

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fanofsuper May 19 2010, 19:14:37 UTC
You're welcome

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kain_abel May 19 2010, 20:00:37 UTC
This was great! <3 I loved the slow climb and fall.
But I think even though Jared never 'saw' Jensen before he is still a better person, because Jensen judges with his eyes, too. Even after turning back still. Jared only needed to fall in love for which he never took the time before.

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timehasa_way May 19 2010, 21:02:59 UTC
It's true! Thank you!! :D

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