Fic: Suburbia, Gillian&Cal, (1/1)

[lindsey_grissom]

Title: Suburbia
Characters: Gillian Foster, Cal Lightman, Emily Lightman.
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Drama, General, Plot
Summary: Cal has a new case that leads the partners into the weird and wonderful world of the Suburbs. Cal&Gillian friendship with a real plot.
Length: 9,593 words.
Status: Complete.
Spoilers: There are some, all through the current

Comments

[cartography]

FIRST (forgot to put that back in :P)

*c&p* ('cause I'm lazy)

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
HE CARRIED HER! INTO HER BED!
:o :O :O KISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSING
Just for the record, that scene where they get home after solving the case? Should have Gillian dragging Cal into the bedroom and start making out with him.

AAAAAH I LOVE ITTTT
SO MUCH
ALL THE FLIRT-Y, BICKER-Y BANTER, SO PERFECT

And all the things I said afterwards. ;)
And lol! "Plot" is a genre now, is it? Hehe.

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥!!!!

[lindsey_grissom]

Hehehe <3 you, lol.

And yes, plot is indeed a genre now. I don't even actually have to add it to any other fics posted here, lol.

[cartography]

<3 you, too. :P

*giggles* Uh huh. Which reminds me... Did you not say you were going to continue Perfect Lie at some point? ;) While we're talking about being undercover... Hehe.

[lindsey_grissom]

Mmmm I did. Lol. Except you still have the only copy of the end of the next chapter. lol. I don't know where the start of it is either, anymore, not since my old laptop died (you may in fact have had the only copy of that on your old pc, lol) but the end of the nxt chapter's in your notebook. The one I gave you. ;)

[baby8love]

<3!!!

that is all. lol :)

[lindsey_grissom]

THANK YOU!!!

;)

[lindsey_grissom]

Oh. Wow. Thank you! I'm REALLY glad you loved this! :D

Hahaha, I hope not! Just think of how many we could get before and after it airs for real! ;)

Thanks again! <3

[katsnthecradle]

LOVE!! Interesting case, WONDERFUL Cal/Gillian interaction. An all-around lovely, enjoyable story!

[lindsey_grissom]

THANK YOU! Really. :D I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

[crumpled_up]

LOVE THIS! Plot!fic with undercover scenario! YES! I love that they kissed and didn't think anything of it afterwards or even mention it. They carried on like nothing happened. I love the little details Cal and Gillian spread about each other, especially Gillian's anger about the cooking classes. Hee. Too bad we never got to see Cal's reaction about the romance novels. ;)

There are so many things to love. I love that Em and Gillian kept in touch. I love that Cal carried Gillian over the threshold and up to her room after the movie. I love Cal pretty much screwing up being domestic by spilling coffee and just everything. I love Emily! The teasing before Cal left and the ensuing fight about Rick. Hee. This could totally be an ep. And thank you for making it a long plot!fic too. There needs to be more of this! The case! The flirting! The kiss! You are a genius.

[lindsey_grissom]

Thank you!! I am so very very glad you enjoyed this so much!

This could totally be an ep. This is what I was aiming for. :D I wanted it to be able to sort of slip into the series, it's something I've never attempted to do before so I'm extremely happy to find that I may have managed it. :D Thank you!

[lindsey_grissom]

THANK YOU! :D