Comments | timeenoughfor: Fic: Tango With A Different Beat, Laura/Bill, (1/1)

lindsey_grissom in timeenoughfor

Fic: Tango With A Different Beat, Laura/Bill, (1/1)

Jun 29, 2009 11:37

Title: Tango With A Different Beat
Fandom: Battlestar Galactica (TV Show)
Characters: Roslin/Adama
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Smut, Humor
Summary: There’s a list, as long as Colonial One with half the points already ticked off. She could pick any of them...
Length: 1,955 words
Status: Complete
A/N: For the second bsg_pornbattle. Prompts added at the end. Short ( Read more... )

pairing: bill/laura, rating: nc-17, genre: smut, fandom: bsg, length: 1000-3000, genre: humour, status: complete, title: tango with a different beat

Comments 14

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lindsey_grissom July 1 2009, 17:44:30 UTC

Thank you!

Haha, yeah, poor Dee. Maybe she picked up some tips though. ;)

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lindsey_grissom July 1 2009, 17:41:23 UTC

Thank you! Phone sex it great with these two. Just imagining both their voices...

crushing83 July 4 2009, 18:05:37 UTC

I really enjoyed reading this.

(OMG, so hot. Can just imagine him saying all of that... and let's just say that totally does it for me, lol)

And the funny at the end. Great job :)

lindsey_grissom July 5 2009, 19:58:27 UTC

Good! I'm glad!

(WOW. Good! And I'm glad you can imagine hearing him there, he's so hard to write for! Especially when it's dirty talk. =P)

This one had two endings...this funny one and a serious one...I loved this one the most. ;) Thank you!

crushing83 July 7 2009, 01:51:16 UTC

(IKR? I struggle with dirty talk in, ahem, adult fics... but his voice is hard to get. I can see her being playful and dirty... and I can see other characters being in that sort of mood. But, I have problems with his. Case in point? I'm trying to write a BSG fic for the kink-bingo thing, and I cannot get him to cooperate.)

Each type of ending has its place. But, it's always nice to mix and match, y'know? Sometimes a little of one emotion with the hot adds a bit more. Like adding a certain spice to your favourite meal. If that makes sense.

Anyway, keep up the good work!