Fic: With Silver Bells and Cockle Shells, Donna/Sam (1/1)

[lindsey_grissom]

Title: With Silver Bells and Cockle Shells
Fandom: Mamma Mia (Movie)
Pairing: Donna/Sam
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Angst, General
Summary: those are dangerous visions, you aren't that girl you thought he knew...
Length: 1,100+ words
Status: Complete
Spoilers: Mamma Mia: The Movie
Author Notes: This is set before the end of the movie, during the "Voulez

Comments

[cartography]

Hahaha, I'm amazed at how you manage to turn even the Voulez-vous scene into something so angsty. :P

You hate that you want to be here, and you hate that you shouldn’t. is still my favourite sentence. ♥ So beautiful!
And I love this on very much:
He’s dragging up feelings you know you buried so deep down, and making you live when you’d adjusted to surviving.

And you’ll think about yourself when it’s over. You’ll hide the pain until he’s gone. You’ll wait until everything has settled and everyone is happy before you’ll cry your heart into your pillow. Again. And then you’ll wake up one morning and you’ll push it aside; cover him beneath the memories in the archives of your life.
This scene, even though it's so sad, would have been perfect on screen. I actually want to see Meryl do that. It'd be so pretty.

You don’t need to be taken care of, but every time he walks away, you wish you were.*sigh* You make me sooo happy! LOL

[lindsey_grissom]

Thank you, and you're more than welcome.

I'm amazed at how you manage to turn even the Voulez-vous scene into something so angsty
It's a gift. ;)

I might be able to write some more...but I can't promise it'll be happy...at least in the case of these too, you know it all ends up happy.

And you know, I really would have loved to see that scene too. She would have pulled it off beautifully. I mean, we saw Donna cry, but it could have been much more emotional...but then, I wasn't a screen-writer. ;)

[cartography]

LOL.

I might be able to write some more...but I can't promise it'll be happy...
As long as you don't kill anybody (which you're absolutely not allowed to do with that fandom!), I'm good. ;)

She would have pulled it off beautifully. I mean, we saw Donna cry, but it could have been much more emotional...
Exactly what I was thinking. *sigh* Oh Meryl I love you! xD

[ftgurl91]

Great fanfic. =D

[lindsey_grissom]

Thank you.

[littleninja245]

Umm, wow. Seriously, that was amazing.

Because you’re too old to need fixing, but too young to let life fade and you don’t think you could live that well with a heart that’s more than only fractured.
That sentence just blew me away. Really, that's so incredibly heartbreaking and kind of beautiful too.

making you live when you’d adjusted to surviving.
That is perfection. Completely. ♥

You don’t need to be taken care of, but every time he walks away, you wish you were.
*sigh*. Beautiful. :)

[lindsey_grissom]

Thank you so much. :) Your comments are especially special (I love how that sounds outloud) because I know you prefer happy fics. ;)

You've actually picked out my favourite lines, so *yay*.

Thanks again!
♥ love the icon ♥

[littleninja245]

You're welcome. :)

Your comments are especially special (I love how that sounds outloud)
LMAO. Me too. XD

love the icon
Thanks. :) I love that scene. Meryl was so amazing in that. *sigh* ♥

[lindsey_grissom]

Meryl was so amazing in that. *sigh*

Oh I absolutely agree. That song always sent shivers through me, but with Meryl singing...I've always felt that singers that are very strong actors always bring several more layers of emotion to a song. And she definitely did.

I used the same pic in the header for my personal journal.

[addisonfan510]

AW! I love this story. You should write more Donna/Sam stories.

[lindsey_grissom]

Thank you. And you know, I think I just might. ;)

[msstreep]

that was simply divine, please do write more!

[lindsey_grissom]

Thank you.

I might, if the right mood hits me. :)