Fic: Non-Linear Love Story (2/6)

[rallalon]

Title: Non-Linear Love Story
Author: rallalon | Rall
Beta: vyctori, latintabasco
Rating: Adult (For clarification on my take on the alien aspects, it's the same as in Scratching the Itch.)
Character Focus: Doctor, Eighth.
Disclaimer: Do not own. Credit to Vyc for finding the song (for she is brilliant and knows her stuff).
X-Posted to halfhumandoctor

Summary: He’s been spun by world

Comments

[rallalon]

Thank you! More coming soon, I promise.

[harpinred]

Intrigued doesn't even begin to describe what I feel for this fic. You have me bloody fascinated with the twists and turns. I mean, I appreciate the hot sex as much as the next girl, but wow! ;) How on earth are you going to 'splain this as far as the 9th Doctor not knowing Rose? OR...DOES he know Rose? GAH!

I love this timey wimey stuff! LOL

[rallalon]

Gah, I'd love to discuss matters, but that would be spoiling, wouldn't it? As always, thanks for reading.

Best. Chapter. Ever.

[skywaterblue]

What I love about you is that I sit around and (because I am quite perverted) think about things like, 'but how would Rose give him head?' and then taadaa. And of course, Time Lords apparently don't have oral sex, which quite frankly, explains everything. But, teehee, it's okay because The Doctor went out and bought 'interspecies sex for dummies'.

So, Ten is taking her to his own past to share with himself. That is delightfully kinky, but the end of this chapter makes me think also delightfully sad because of the day he has chosen/will choose. And of course, oh, Rose knows and is in on it.

Re: Best. Chapter. Ever.

[rallalon]

Heheh, thank you!

What I love about you is that I sit around and (because I am quite perverted) think about things like, 'but how would Rose give him head?' and then taadaa.

You have no idea how long I've spent figuring all of this out. There was a process. An honest-to-god development and consideration and absurdly lengthy conversations hammering out the details.

Re: Best. Chapter. Ever.

[skywaterblue]

It shows. Truly awesome. :)

[ravenclaw_devil]

My heart soared throughout this chapter...until I read the last line. I went from euphoric to filled with dread, chilled and horrified. GREAT JOB!!! It's rare to read such pathos from a story - especially from fanfiction, but you did the job fantastically. I can't wait to read more, particularly how Rose manages to pull the Doctor back from the ravages of the Time War before she pulls him back in her own timeline (19 year old Rose). I really loved how she danced around telling him her name and can't wait to find out how she manages to keep a paradox from forming - if he recognizes her at age 19 as having seen and danced/loved her at the age I'm assuming is post-Doomsday. Is she (still) the Bad Wolf? Is that how she is managing to take the quick path to the 8th's slow path? Is this her attempt post-Doomsday to return to the Doctor of her own time (post-Doomsday 10)? I can't wait to read part 3 - please post very soon!!

[rallalon]

Wow, thank you!

I went from euphoric to filled with dread, chilled and horrified.

I am both pleased and, well, incapable of writing happy. At least for long periods of time.

I'd love to give you feedback on all of your very questions, but that would be spoiling it, wouldn't it?

[insanityclings]

I don't know how to express my love for this. Amazing. Marvelous. Wonderful.

[rallalon]

Thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed it!