I really love your writing -- the way that your narrative takes me to Greece, shows me how broken the TARDIS is. It's lovely & exquisite. I'm not a fan of the "Rose is a Time Lord" sort of story, but your writing was so strong that I decided to continue. I'm SO glad that I did, & I'm really interested in how everything turns out.
The first paragraph really is a marvelous hook. :D
Oh, thank you! I must admit, I'm not a big fan of the way the Time Lord!Rose is done sometimes, but I think that just being brought back to life by Rose had effected Jack so much, so oculdn't have come away from it completely normal, right?
That's a relief to hear, as I'm usually terrible at grabbing people. Heh.
Well, sensiblecat did beta the second chapter, but more input is always better. And the first chapter hasn't been beta'd yet, so I'll send it your way, along with other chapters, as they get written.
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The first paragraph really is a marvelous hook. :D
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That's a relief to hear, as I'm usually terrible at grabbing people. Heh.
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And I love the premise!
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