Fic: Tart and Sweet

[doona_rose]

Title: Tart and Sweet
Rating: M. Only just though.
Characters: Ten/Rose
Summary: A sequel to the ficlet Peaches. The Doctor decides to get back at Rose.

You do not need to have read Peaches to get this one though it’d definitely help. And it’s only a few hundred words so shan’t take long.

Warnings: Fluff…lots of fluff. Sorry, that was Peaches

Comments

[sandsofpatience]

Hmmm so now we can officially add peaches to our list of sexy things Ten can use! Wonderfully written! Just the right amount of fluff and sexual tension/ smutish (if that makes any sense!) great and loved it

[doona_rose]

I hate to tell you, but I think Ten could make anything pretty damn sexy. I mean, he could make chicken nuggets sexy. A desk sexy. A pencil sexy. Anything really. And please don't ask because I can already think precisely how. And this is now officially a useless tangent. Anyhow, thanks very much for your kind words, you are making sense and it's making me grin. So, ta.

[sparklechick268]

Guh...
::THUD::
*dies*
*twitch*

You killed me. Again!
That was just... Amazing! Completely brilliant and totally fantastic, and, and, and...
MORE!!! (please?)

*goes off to buy peaches*

[doona_rose]

*grin*
Good. This is what I aim for. Death. Sounds a bit harsh, but it is lovely to see in my readers.

I'm stoked that you liked it and took the time and effort to write me such a lovely review. As for more...you never know what I might write. Not that you should get your hopes up, I do have to go back to working six days weeks as of tomorrow.

[sparklechick268]

Well, at the rate you're killing us off, there'll be no one left to read them! ;)

*re-reads last line*
*dies*
I see that, and just imagine the tongue of Tennant roaming around, and... well... *dies*

I have to say, that was just a perfect ending. Completely ::THUD:: worthy. Which leaves me wondering whether David Tennant likes peaches. Hmm, I think I shall have to find out somehow ;)

[doona_rose]

Yes, well, that last line almost wasn't the last line. I had a few problems with the end because at first I just didn't know where to take it once I got past the fun stuff and then when I knew exactly where I wanted to take it I just couldn't write it, or get that perfect line out.

I toyed with the idea of taking it a little further, writing what I thought would happen next a little more blatantly but didn't have the guts and I think this worked better. I mean, maybe I didn't mean that. Maybe I just meant he was going to steal the peach out of her hand...yeah...right.

And if I ever meet David Tennant I will be sure to ask if he likes peaches, raspberries, rum, etc., etc. I've heard he likes kiwi fruit...

[funkyinfishnet]

Wow, hot and sweet! Really well written with a great light feeling to it as well as a depth of emotion. Loved it! :- )

[doona_rose]

Thanks very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it and took the time to review.

[hobbit_hunter]

*squeaks* *thuds* *dies promptly*

*waves a flag* GO TEN! Buahahha Rose has been pwned! *wave wave*

Lovely :D

“That,” he said very seriously, “was my breakfast. And I do indeed intend on getting it back.” <---best THUD worthy line ever.

[doona_rose]

*grins* Wonderful. Just the desired affect. And after everyone seemed so happy to have Rose pwn Ten in 'peaches' it seemed only natural for me to turn around and allow Ten to pwn Rose. Though she does almost get him back a bit in the end. And then Ten majorly, majorly PWNs Rose in what followed that last, THUD worthy line. But you don't get to read that.

[lovepollution]

::checks pulse:: Yep, I'm dead.

[doona_rose]

*grins* Fantastic.