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Fic: Five Days In Fall - Donald/Timmy (movie 'verse) - PG13

Nov 14, 2013 18:19

TITLE: Five Days In Fall
FANDOM: Don Strachey Mysteries (Movie 'verse)
PAIRING: Don/Timmy
CHARACTERS: Don, Timmy, Other original characters
WORDS: 2,330
NOTES: Written for the Fall Don & Timmy 'thon. Betaed by the wonderful selenic76 - All remaining mistakes my own ( Read more... )

[thon] 2013 fall, [m]fanfiction, [a]squidgiepdx

Comments 16

storyfan November 15 2013, 02:58:05 UTC

Oh, this is such a darling story! I love it when one of the guys surprises the other, especially with something he never thought he'd get.
Great job! This is a wonderful start to our thon. :)

squidgiepdx November 22 2013, 01:28:01 UTC

Thank you! I have to admit that I was a little nervous being first, but I knew I'd be okay when the story unfolded in my head. :)

lil_1337 November 15 2013, 03:13:46 UTC

That was wonderful! The love that Donald has for Timothy is so obvious as is the trust that Timothy has in return. Letting go and having no clue what is going to happen is difficult especially for someone who is used to being in control and Timothy handles it well because he knows that whatever Donald has planned is going to something they both will enjoy. I would love to read more of this if you are so inclined.

squidgiepdx November 22 2013, 01:29:47 UTC

You know, there is something about this storyline that, in my head, tells me it could be expanded upon. Never know - it may happen! :) Thank you!

selenic76 November 15 2013, 07:19:56 UTC

Still love this story so much! They're so adorable it just melts my heart, ♥♥♥! ^_^ (loved the bits about the car btw, made me smile and laugh, and also, they show how much Don really loves Timmy, to spend all that money on the trip, instead of fixing his vehicle :D)

squidgiepdx November 22 2013, 01:30:56 UTC

Exactly!!! The car, eh - Timmy is what's important! :)

Thank you - and thank you again for betaing for me! You always have such incredible, creative, wonderful points!!!

selenic76 November 22 2013, 07:30:45 UTC

You are most welcome, and feel free to ask again, I'd be happy to help if I can ^_^

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squidgiepdx November 22 2013, 01:31:40 UTC

Thank you! I have such a soft spot for these two... And OMG - your icon! LOVE IT! I need to re-watch that movie. :)

ursula2 November 16 2013, 15:33:58 UTC

I would have loved to read more... ;-). It´s so sweet of Don for making Timmy so happy, you can feel the love. Thank you for writing !!!!!!

squidgiepdx November 22 2013, 01:33:11 UTC

Hey - who knows, this may get a sequel sometime! Maybe this time Timothy surprises Donald. :)

Thank you!!! :)