Comments | tilden13: Fic: The Night Kitchen

tilden13

Fic: The Night Kitchen

Oct 01, 2012 23:18

Title: The Night Kitchen
Fandom: Fringe
Characters: Etta, Olivia, Peter, Walter, Astrid
Word count: 1447
Rating: PG
Summary: Post- 5.01. Peter and Olivia try to put some pieces back together.
Disclaimer: Actual Fringe writers, I bow to your inspiration. I own nothing.

( Peter means his words for now, the last few days in the apartment…but he means then, too. )

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Comments 3

all_shine_on October 3 2012, 04:11:15 UTC

I absolutely loved this. I can so see this scene, here these lines on the show. It fit in perfectly with what we know about Peter and Olivia's estrangement (I will never call it a breakup, thankyouverymuch) and how they simply aren't angry at each other. It was just too hard. Their scene in the kitchen is sweet and sad and gorgeous and the ending...I loved how you put in a bit of Astrid and Etta having a relationship, I hope we get to see that on the show. Thank you so much for sharing!

tilden13 October 3 2012, 06:26:06 UTC

Thank you! You're right about "estrangement;" this is not by any stretch of the imagination a D-I-V-O-R-C-E, for heaven's sake. Just two people suffering more than their fair share of blows, poor things. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Love your screen name, BTW.

mack_the_spoon October 7 2012, 04:50:13 UTC

Oh, this was awesome. I loved it. Feels very right, and I totally think they'll patch things up - emotionally as well as in other ways - very soon, because as the above commenter mentioned, it's not that they were angry at each other, they were (are?) grieving.