closer

Jan 05, 2009 23:57

I'm posting this as a test for now, get a few people's responses and then go totally public with this. I'm so fucking nervous about this since it's like, my first time writing adult stuff. If you want some trivia, I actually avoided the word cock quite successfully. XD

This was also posted about 15 minutes after it was finished.



Title: Closer
Author: tiivibear :3
Pairing: TOP/Daesung
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Not mine. This is purely for entertainment purposes only.
A/N: This did not come out as I wanted to, but I'm not too disappointed.

Download and then listen while you're reading :3

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The pace is fast and the force is hard as Seunghyun pounds like there is no tomorrow. It’s not as if he wants to forget who’s under him taking the sheer brutality of the impact but this is what he needs. It’s what he craves. A warm body that now is on his knees on the bed receiving this treatment but never complaining. Not even once. Because it’s also what Daesung wants. He wants to be pushed down, treated roughly but not unkindly as there still always was a weak gentleness in Seunghyun’s strength.

Seunghyun gives and Daesung takes. It’s one of the two rules they have in their little game. On his knees, on his back, bent over a table, up against a wall, it doesn’t matter. Daesung always takes Seunghyun’s dominance with enthusiasm, if not with gratitude.

On and on, fast and hard, the bed already rocked and squeaked the springs making the only kind of noise they could make. Daesung’s hands were desperately trying to hold on to what he could reach and he thanked the gods for his thigh muscles as he steadily ran towards his climax. Seunghyun just holds on to Daesung’s hips as he fastens his thrusting.

Daesung moans and Seunghyun groans. It’s the only vocal communication they have in these situations.

Seunghyun has found the little place inside Daesung’s body that makes Daesung arch his back just a tad bit more and leaves him gasping. It doesn’t help either that it also makes him tighten his muscles, just enough to result in a hitch in the speed and Seunghyun lets out a low growl and his hands tightens around Daesung’s hips.

Daesung always comes first. Always. That is rule number two.

When Seunghyun wraps his hand around the base of Daesung’s cock, Daesung doesn’t even bother to cover up his loud gasp for breath as a new type of pleasure courses through him. Seunghyun lowers himself onto Daesung’s back and drops his head to his neck to give him another one of those red marks that already is on display on Daesung’s neck. Never does he slow his tempo of thrusting or pumping. Daesung just keeps on making noise deep in his throat as he tries to meet the thrusts.

“Come on, be a good boy and come for me,” Seunghyun says with that deep voice he uses rarely directly into Daesung’s ear and Daesung comes. He comes hard and loudly and he’s clutching one of the bed poles in hope of not just collapsing down on the bed.

It does not take Seunghyun to come when he now knows Daesung is finished and can safely let go. A few more thrusts is all that it takes since he was closer than imagined.

After is just lazy touching, closed eyes and coziness.

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Comments? :)

fandom: big bang, !fic, #nc-17, pairing: top/daesung

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