Comments | tiivibear: you're beautiful

tiivibear

you're beautiful

Dec 19, 2008 23:59

Alrighty, I'm finally taking a break from my drama watching XD

Title: You're Beautiful
Author: tiivibear :3
Pairing: TOP/Daesung
Rating: PG(-13?)
Summary: Angst, angst and angst. Then fluff :3
A/N: Dedicated to aeropi because she is my inspiration XD <3

( You're Beautiful )

fandom: big bang, !fic, #pg, -one-shot, pairing: top/daesung

Comments 23

todefinebeauty December 19 2008, 23:49:46 UTC

Awww.. short but sweet. Poor Daesung.. I think you're beautiful too!! XD I love TOP/Daesung. The image of them in the mirror.. :D Love it, I can just imagine TOP putting his arms around Daesung's shoulders like that. I actually really like how you chose to have him do that instead of putting his arms around his waist, because that would seem, to me, less TOP-like!

(Haha and of course it's gay.. it's two guys :P)

tiivibear December 20 2008, 00:05:18 UTC

Daesung is really cute ;_; ...and beautiful :3 ...he has one of the nicest smiles I've seen XD
Todae is pure win(*cough*LOVE*cough*)! :D (*Shameless promotion* I actually have a picspam of them in my LJ ;3)

Hihi, the mirror part was the main idea XD
Btw putting arms around the waist is also very over-done :/ so that's why I chose the shoulders :3 BUT you might be onto something =)ahh~~ TOP has such intense eyes O_O you can be totally transfixed by them sometimes XD

(bahaha, I meant "gay" as in totally sissy-like, erm, I don't really know how to explain it XD but, you know, not really tacky but somewhere down that line XD)

Thank you for reading! :D

todefinebeauty December 20 2008, 01:45:03 UTC

Oooh I know! Dae's smile is to die for :) and TOP's intense eyes! (hahaa I will check out that picspam!!)

I agree about the waist being over-done, I'm glad you chose the shoulders instead.. I think it's cute as well, it's definitely something you can picture them doing.

Thank YOU for writing! :D

tiivibear December 21 2008, 17:15:06 UTC

Be sure to do that! ;D

Hihi yeah, but now that I've seen TOP smack Daesung's butt (multiple times!) and cuddle/kiss him (even more times)... I can picture them doing ANYTHING. O_O X''''D

Aish, when it comes to slashing, there's nothing as good as writing/spazzing over Todae XD

stephyalexis December 20 2008, 03:26:52 UTC

ooh this was really cute
dae is super cute xd
loved~~`

tiivibear December 20 2008, 11:19:33 UTC

thank you for reading ^^
heh, he sure is :3

where do I even begin?!?! aeropi December 20 2008, 05:45:02 UTC

first of all, good job getting an A+ in programming! i have another programmer friend and she's a genius who struggled in that class...sooo...are you a super genius? XD wah~ good job! :DD!!

and second, ASLKFHJSHGSLJAF!!! aaah! AAHH

(for the record, i tried to find something to say after 'aaah!' and all i could come up with was...more AAHH...phail @@)

this cute one-shot was so sweet!~ and it's so realistic too, that the 'un-pretty boy' would have image issues when comparing himself to the 'cool hyung.'

"his voice is tense and filled with awkwardness as he rushes out of the room."

that part just killed me. idek

Re: where do I even begin?!?! aeropi December 20 2008, 05:53:22 UTC

....why i'm such an idiot. who knew there was a keyboard shortcut for posting?! ANYWAYS...

right, idek why, i'm such an angst whore so i loved that line :3 and their interaction! and the vulnerability! and you might think i'm overdoing it for a one-shot, but i really liked it >:3 you needn't have been nervous...write more! (cough*pwptodaewhere?) fuhuhu~

thanks a lot for the dedication~! o///o <3

Re: where do I even begin?!?! tiivibear December 20 2008, 15:37:11 UTC

thank you :3 AHAHAHA super genius? NO. Definitively not. Trust me XD but seriously, I don't know how that happened...? yeahwhatever, I'm not complaining! XD ( ... )

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tiivibear December 21 2008, 17:20:09 UTC

Aww, thank you :3 it was that feeling what I was aiming for ^^

He is so cute and funny! Sometimes, he reminds me of a really cute 5-year-old boy ^3^ ..but ofc in a good way! XD

sunnystarr December 21 2008, 14:37:04 UTC

That was so sweet. I always imagined poor Daesung has a lot of image issues which obviously isn’t helped by the media’s emphasis on how he doesn’t have the conventional ‘looks’ of an idol. But of course, he is beautiful x]

tiivibear December 21 2008, 17:34:24 UTC

Me too! :O YG has even called him "the ugly one" ;_; HE'S SO NOT UGLY ;_____; He is super cute and everything in that direction :P aigoo, stupid media :( we should gather all fans and like describe what we all like about him, put it into a nice book and then mail it to him X) so he knows that his fans loves him dearly :] ...or make TOP do something about it X''D

Anyways, thank you for reading! :D