Bandfic: Swimming Across A River So Deep (Jon/Ryan, PG-13)

[tigs]

Title: Swimming Across A River So Deep
Author: tigs
Pairing: Jon/Ryan
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Don't know, don't own.

Summary: When Ryan tells the story, though, he begins it here: with a photograph, a meeting, an unwilling smile. (~6500 words)

A/N: Written for lyo in a holiday fic exchange. She mentioned many things that she'd like, including Jon/

Comments

[prettykitty_aya]

ugh, i just totally woobied. ALSO, THIS IS EFFIN' BEAUTIFUL, just sayin'.

[tigs]

Thank you so much! I'm so happy that you enjoyed it!

[goldenseal]

this is me: :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

[tigs]

Aww, yay! Thank you!

[halighanawfulie]

This was lovely. I really liked it :)

[tigs]

Thank you! I'm so glad!

[extemporally]

I really liked this! The story format and how nothing much seems to happen, but... it was really lovely and

Once upon a time there was a boy, a very, very good boy named Jon, and he grew up in the kingdom of Chicago. He was happy growing up, or at least he thought he was, and then one day, when he was old enough, he left home and moved to the great center of learning, the University of Chicago. It was there, during his third year, that he met a boy named Ryan. Did I mention that the boy named Jon was very, very good? Because he must have been, to get that as a reward.

is just about perfect.

[tigs]

Oh, thank you so much! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it!

[seimaisin]

Yay! I love the changes you made, they're perfect. :D

[tigs]

Belated, belated, but again thank you so much for your help with this! I know I didn't take all of your suggestions, but you made me look really hard at a lot of things, and I know it was a better story for it. So thank you again!