The politics of it were really interesting, and I liked seeing why they actually fought against the government. :) (Haha, yeah, I can't imagine the government calling them the heroes when Kurt & Puck were fighting them!)
Finn dies first. For some reason (I don't even like Finn that much) that just killed me!
I did wonder about the Shadow and Sol names, and the irony of Kurt being named the opposite of Puck.
I don't think you did explain about Kurt taking himself out of reality - you mentioned that his mother did that, and he would do the same, but not to save the world - but that was in the very first chapter, I think. :)
When will he return?! Is it really complete? :S
Thank you for doing this, it was brilliant to read your commentary for both chapters, and I really hope there's more for this story soon. But if not, I loved the story and will probably re-read it more than once! ^_^
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The politics of it were really interesting, and I liked seeing why they actually fought against the government. :)
(Haha, yeah, I can't imagine the government calling them the heroes when Kurt & Puck were fighting them!)
Finn dies first.
For some reason (I don't even like Finn that much) that just killed me!
I did wonder about the Shadow and Sol names, and the irony of Kurt being named the opposite of Puck.
I don't think you did explain about Kurt taking himself out of reality - you mentioned that his mother did that, and he would do the same, but not to save the world - but that was in the very first chapter, I think. :)
When will he return?! Is it really complete? :S
Thank you for doing this, it was brilliant to read your commentary for both chapters, and I really hope there's more for this story soon. But if not, I loved the story and will probably re-read it more than once! ^_^
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(That icon is a thing of beauty.)
I think I explained the Kurt vs reality in a few comments, when people asked.
Yes, Kurt will return. And eventually, the supers&normals had equal rights, but it wasn't during Kurt&Puck's lifetime. (They ended bloodily.)
There will never be more, I'm pretty sure. Sorry.
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Ah, okay then. I'm not sure I read any comments.
Oh, that sounds really good! Even them dying bloodily. ... I didn't mean that to sound quite so morbid. o_O *shrugs*
That's all right. I love the story anyway.
Thank you again for the commentary! I really enjoyed it. :)
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