Comments | tigriswolf: drabbles: Star Wars and Narnia

tigriswolf

drabbles: Star Wars and Narnia - PG, PG13

Jul 21, 2008 00:50

Title: Tarnished
Fandom: Star Wars
Disclaimer: not my characters; just for fun.
Warnings: spoilers for up to Empire Strikes Back
Pairings: none, really
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 200
Point of view: first

( I was once the chosen. )

gen, movie fic, rated pg-thirteen, title: t, rated pg, point of view: first person, wordcount: drabble, fic, title: w, fanfic: star wars, fanfic: chronicles of narnia, point of view: third person, slash

Comments 14

irnan July 21 2008, 06:41:14 UTC

... and now you've made me want to write Star Wars fic.

Love the first one best of all.

tigriswolf July 22 2008, 02:21:20 UTC

Thank you!

realpestilence July 21 2008, 13:27:02 UTC

I've been *waiting* for that Miraz/Edmund! I shouldn't be so pleased about it, but yay! I mean, oh, poor Edmund. *grins*

Expand the fic, won't you...? *eyes tags defiantly*

Seriously, it *is* very good. :)

tigriswolf July 22 2008, 02:21:57 UTC

In my head, there're about four different versions, and all would be epic.

realpestilence July 22 2008, 03:05:33 UTC

I would shake your head til the fics fall out, but that would make you dizzy.

Do you ever participate in the Sweet Charity auction? *whistles innocently*

tigriswolf July 22 2008, 03:15:58 UTC

Hey, no shaking of me! I had a concussion recently.

No, I never have. I don't even really know what it is.

Thread 5

gogothgirl July 21 2008, 16:31:51 UTC

(miraz/edmund)
oh god.
-faints frm shock-

tigriswolf July 22 2008, 02:22:13 UTC

*revives you*

barbie_speidel July 21 2008, 18:41:27 UTC

Finally, a really original coupling! Edmund seems very human: has his weaknesses, and I love him because of that! great drabble!

barbie_speidel July 21 2008, 18:42:20 UTC

Oh, and Jon Mclean?!? I love him, that is my favorite song of all time!

tigriswolf July 22 2008, 02:22:30 UTC

Thank you for reading!

alice_pike July 23 2008, 04:00:45 UTC

You really made the Ed/Miraz work, and even though it's kind of heartbreaking, I really like it. Edmund seems real and pitiable, and very IC. I also love that one line about them being back in England, because it distances him from the actual event even more, and really highlights just how much he's affected by it. I also like how you didn't give us anything about the others, how we don't know how they reacted, or if they're even aware. Makes it more powerful, more solely about Ed.

I love the SW one, as well. It's always been hard for me to mentally link Luke and Leia to Anakin's era, but your drabble makes that really easy to do. I like the way you've set it up, too, how you slowly make your way to the resolution, saying so much on the way there about Anakin, as well. The last bit is so good, and the last line really effective.

An innocent boy, with his father’s eyes-and, I hope, his mother’s heart. I love this line, btw.

tigriswolf July 23 2008, 04:14:55 UTC

Thank you so much!