SN canon drabbles: 3.9-3.12

May 16, 2008 08:30

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And I will fight his fight

“Sam, something’s wrong,” he tells you. “There’s a bunch’a knives inside me.” He’s doubling over, coughing and gasping, and you tear the room apart looking for the curse. He falls off the bed, blood sprinkling out of his mouth, and you stop. Just stop. Look at him for a moment, everything ( Read more... )

gen, point of view: second person, title: i, title: t, rated pg, wordcount: drabble, title: l, fic, title: a, series: supernatural canon drabbles, fanfic: supernatural, point of view: third person, tv fic

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iamstealthyone May 16 2008, 17:27:58 UTC
Another great set of drabbles. :) I especially like how the second-person POV works in that first drabble. It makes Sam's angst wonderfully immediate and personal.

And I will fight his fight

Nicely done. I really like how you captured Sam’s state of mind in this moment, especially here:

No. This won’t happen. If you have to kill every single person in this fucking town, this will not be how and where Dean dies.

Awesome determination.

I am a watercolor

You can’t escape me, Dean!

You will, you have to… this shard of your greatest fear will not be your fate.

Oh, Dean. So scared and so very, very doomed.

lonely and full of echoes

I can’t stop it and I can’t change it, and if you can say anything to make that better, please, for the love of God, do.

Poor, desperate Sam. He went through so much angst in this ep.

The world remembers the date

Good job capturing Victor’s satisfaction in this moment, the way he’s enjoying his victory and not above rubbing it in.

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tigriswolf May 16 2008, 18:12:58 UTC
Thank you so much!

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layne67 May 20 2008, 00:17:15 UTC
And then he says the clincher-they’ll never see each other again

I love that moment when Henricksen said that. Dean lost his smirk and his walls just sort of came down, and for a minute there you could see the real him, all vulnerable and open. Oh Henricksen did his homework alright!

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tigriswolf May 20 2008, 04:38:00 UTC
Thank you for reading!

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